this story got me hooked ?????? please update the rest
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this novel was one of the winners of Spirity , so it had great potentials, but alas it got a rushed ending , everything was rushed ,from relationships ,romance, powere ,etc ...even the writing quality was rushed at the end ? , full of misspelling and wrong names.and at the end of the day all MC's powers were borrowed from others, as if he wasn't the MC of this story ...but at least it got a happy ending
Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ?!
The story getting boring he is having a dream and everything in it becomes real what bull**** plot.the author is simply wasting a good plot.if story continue to this this will only waste good plot for novel
CHINA NUMBA ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!WE ARE FRIEND WITH TIGER IT NOT LIKE WE EAT THEIR PINUS BELIEVING THAT THEIR MAKE STRONGER!!!! ALL OTHER NATIONS ARE CORRUPT AND ARE NOT AS GOOD AS US. IT NOT LIKE WE KILL DOG ON THE STREET OR STEALING THEM OR ANYTHING.
I created this account in order to say that this novel should really get what it deserves. Which is a slightly better translation and a lot faster release rate. If you can't fix the release rate please give it someone that has the capability to so or of course just get someone to help you. With regards :)
What a shame...... clearly it's a sketch of the novel profane prince of domination, however it's a little worse, mc poorly done, and the way you try to fragment the scenes is bad, after all it's not an anime, it doesn't flow .
The main reason I gave this novel such a low rating is that the author seems to constantly forget about previous things that YY has learned and/or characters that contribute to his power ups.One key example is his aspect totem, the 9 neonate. It is supposed to grow along with YY since it is a "beast mark of life" which allowed it to go through a heavenly tribulation back in the Tian Yuan world. However, nothing has happened to it since then. YY has grown multiple realms (nearly 4 full realms if I'm not wrong), but the 9 neo is still at the 1st tribulation which doesn't make any sense. He has eaten how many high level resources and nothing made it go through the 2nd tribulation? I call BS.Another example is the godly OP bow he received from the God Advent Tower spirit. From what I remember, it was made from divine beast parts which is on the same level of his 3-legged golden crow(don't quote me on this, didn't feel like re-reading that whole arc for this review). YY could use around 5-10% of its power when he was at the yuan opening realm(again, don't quote me on that), but he has never even touched the bow since leaving the Tian Yuan world. It's almost safe to assume that the author completely forgot about the bow entirely.Lastly, I gave this novel this rating because the author once said back when this novel used to be on GravityTales that he would flush out the main story within 500-800 chapters. This notice was around chapter 550 or so, but I have yet to see where the main story is supposed to go. I can see that YY will fight with the White Lunar Empire soon and obviously win due to plot armor and 1337 hax, but nothing about what happens from there. There is no big bad enemy at the end of the tunnel, no dark forces watching from the shadows, nothing so much as an inkling of knowledge on who/what YY will be fighting to end the story. I guess you could say that I've been waiting for something to be revealed and yet I feel disappointed every time.You could take my rant/review for a grain of salt, but this is just how I feel about this novel. I've been reading almost since the beginning, and I've just longing for the author to come up with more story telling that doesn't involve near useless random/stepping stone characters.Thanks for your time. :]
This is a fun, lightweight story. The protagonist Lu Wu transmigrates into a younger self, but i a very different world and a very different life situation. Of course, many of the familiar memes are still present, but there are some subtle variations. The 440-pound little fat girl from next door, who follows him around like a puppy dog—the fact that both of his parents are screeching neurotics—his extreme reluctance to interact with the original's parents…Yeah, quite a bit of good stuff there. I hope this one gets picked. Surely it is better to have this story than another tired Gamer Fiction piece!
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E bom mais demora muito para atualizar e isso é um pouco chato...........................................................................................