She continued the previous conversation in order to avoid the current topic.
The story seemed very intetesting. But I don't know if it's the author or the translator, it's sooo poorly written. And the technical and scientifical explanations hurt my eyes son much that I litterally can't continu reading
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A more “savoury” version of my review at 80 chapters: This is a peak-tier gem.Writing Quality: Pleasant- Very few grammar mistakes and a good level of dialogue-text. System text presented clearly. 5 starsUpdating stability: 1ch/day- Great in my books. One of my only gripes with this novel though is the short chapters… some conversations spill into the next chapter which can break immersion. The release frequency balances that out so not detrimental. 4 starsStory development: There’s an established overarching goal and arc goal. It works towards meeting the arc goal with great storytelling and interesting developments and schemes in the background. Probably the best point about the novel. Lemons do not detract from the experience- in some scenes it’s described, whereas others are just post-coital conversations, something I’m grateful for! No dragging of lemons across several chapters + the novel isn’t all about seducing females to get to the top, though that is a part of the MC’s success. 5 starsCharacters: The MC is perfect! Rational, practical, good at ?, and most of all possessive. Definitely No NTR in this novel. Other characters have been portrayed well: Bodyguard recruits are as naive as recruits, City lords are as scheming as they should be, and potential harem members are buttered up well (developments are quick but not dissatisfyingly so). 5 starsWorld Background: An easy to understand power system which is definitely appreciated! Info is disseminated in dialogues naturally and through non-chunky paragraphs. Hope there’ll be some expansion on the blackthorn kingdom and demon fronts, maybe some political manoeuvring etc in the future. 4.5 starsThe MC is an ambitious man who will scheme and subjugate [women] his way to the top. If you like this premise, then you’ll enjoy the novel for sure.
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It's easy to read and understand , but, how should I say this? underwhelming or unexpected. The novel doesn't follow how I thought , it's more like a book written for kids who want to get the "isekai" understanding. He acts like a kid when he is older than that, he can't make any firm resolution ? and seem to go back on his word ,especially in the 'Princess Arc', always getting pulled along .It is a great novel in it own respect ?.Sorry Author , it seems this isn't my cup of tea , we part ways here. thanks for the book
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A must read book!! I love the pics author had attached in between, it helps clear the understanding better. Cecily is beautiful beyond words, but arrogant at the same time. Author has truly succeeded in creating a fascinating world background!! Guys do give it a read!!??
[The First Volume] Just short of 5 stars.STORY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). The story is mediocre and can be best described as uninteresting but understandable.Pros:*There are clear objectives*well-defined setting*Imaginative details.Cons:*Slow-paced tells your generic plot. Thirty chapters for three plot points; doesn't happen as much in later volumes.WORLD BACKGROUND ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). What were they doing while they were speaking, what environment are they in, how cold is the water? Long descriptions are a no-go, but no descriptions are worse than that. They do try though, in the first volume where he was in the cave, they had descriptions and so on, but things get cloudy when the wording comes into play.WRITING QUALITY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (four stars). It isn't that bad; there are some issues with the wording here and there, but everything's grammatically correct.UPDATE STABILITY ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5 stars).CHARACTER DESIGN ⭐️⭐️⭐️ (three stars). There isn't much attention to other characters apart from the main character, but I hear it gets changed later.
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Raw title: 突然成仙了怎么办Status: 681 Chapters (Ongoing)............................................................................................................................................
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