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Good story!With pacing as smooth as butter and characters got their distinct voices.I has immense potential to be a hit.Looking forward to more chapters.
The story seems well built the twist was sudden but the rot is really something i mean from the start i could not understand how it functions its a unique concept and it has a good potential!!
This book is absolutely riveting! It’s a perfect blend of magic and comedy, and I highly recommend it to anyone who’s looking for a fun and entertaining read.
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEH BLAhem anyway. a truly noteworthy piece of literature. Worthy of my time(omgthisbookismakingmeblush)
It's a classic trope of being reincarnated as a powerful being or destined to be one. But still, the book / author is giving a story with an MC a proper development not just an overpowered character. Keep it up, Author.
I have to say Lixue’s life is so sad, to get your works stolen and claimed by another person is so sad, there’s a certain line that the author used that really touched me. I hope this book will be good, I see a lot of potential in it!!! All the best author
I like the novel and I’m just curious is there any SmutNTR
Started and couldn't out it down until I caught up (currently 145). It's top tier.
Wonderful novel I am impressed. .
This story has potential to be great. The world building is better than most stories on this app while leaving some questions about the true nature of the world. However, I am pretty disappointed in the free chapters of the story. There was too much exposition in places where it was inappropriate, such as right before or after battles. The size of chapters are pretty short too, which means the majority of the chapter is filled with lots of information that doesn’t really matter at the moment. The author had a chance to show us the world that awakeners enter, showing us struggle, mistakes, and ultimately triumph. Instead we get two fights with some slimes and then a couple more monsters are quickly killed of screen before he goes back home. I get that the first volume was supposed to be slow, but it felt like almost nothing important happened. We still know nothing of his skills or talent. I can’t see myself coming back to spend money on this story if it stays like this.
a good story with an interesting story concept.
Synopsis was excellent clearly explains enough to catch readers interest.Chapter 1 which I dropped at ruins entirety of itSentence structure is almost non existentI find it hard to believe that their is a family like that, horrible siblings and parents sure but to not even notice son isn't living with them Is difficult to believe. Another thing difficult to believe is them being so oblivious that they don't notice mc success in things
