If you don't mind reading a slow-paced novel, this one is for you. You might get bored of the first 50 chaps but you have to get used to it since it will continue until the end. The world building is interesting and i like that MC is into a alchemist and a dedicated one. Well i recommend this novel for people who have too much time in their hands since this novel will be a heck boring as you read more because of the slow-pace.
Take your time with the story and don't rush it. I've seen many a novel where the author felt pressured by his readers to quicken the pace and ended up being dissatisfied with the way it turned out. I would hate to see this novel get dropped or enter hiatus.psdta : GOOD NOVEL =)
I could not take the bad grammar, I read someone said it will be better. They might be right. However, usually people just get used to it over time.Character development in the start is shallow and copied. Story is a typical "MC is a never bored character that can train forever without stopping and needs money for his sick mother, but could not finish more that high school"Might be better later, but I would bet it is just average.
well it wasn't as good as i expected, but it is still a good read
A good reincarnation novel, with a stable plot (ch. 40s). For those who hate vr, don't worry, this is not it.**. Have you ever had a dream that you, um, you had, your, you- you could, you’ll do, you- you wants, you, you could do so, you- you’ll do, you could- you, you want, you want them to do you so much you could do anything?
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Good book with evil and villain main character. no moral restraints and willing to do anything for power and benefits. story is good and world is gradually being fleshed out.
Im sad that this didn’t get pickedHopefully it’s gets a chance again.MC is reasonably smartSystem isn’t annoyingPlot is a good idea40 chapters are good
Right. This story is amazing from chapters 0 to 50. If you like funny comedic stories with a good plot this is worth a read. Now let's talk about the bad news.After chapter 50 the MC leaves his village behind to take some exams. At this point in the story, all the people in the story excluding the villagers, a couple girls, and some examiners are cookie cutter personalities. For some bizarre reason, the main character is villainized by every scholar in the two cities we visit for exams. What's even stranger, is that everyone regardless of background does this. On top of this, almost all these "Scholars" start behaving like muscle brained men. There's a really bizarre contrast to this story. When the MC walks into a room everyone is speaking poetry and elegance. Then they notice the MC and suddenly it's bravado and taunts... There's no poetic taunt, or historical story to outwit the opponent it's pure I'm better than you smack talk. Naturally, this means the MC is the only one quoting poetry and making metaphors in the face-smacking competitions. But it's bizarre because these people are all scholars. They memorize this stuff for power! I know for a fact if you read enough wuxia you start getting an urge to use these foreign sayings in society. But yet these "scholars" do not behave this way in the story and instead only mock and laugh at the MC. Finally, I am pretty frustrated because I do not understand the MC's goal. He wants to take the imperial examination but for some reason can't signup for that exam. He has to take several easier exams first and these exams don't test your knowledge they also test combat capability... Against groups of your peers. Meaning ten guys could team up to knock you out of the competition if they so chose to... So here are my stars:Translation: 1 Star. (it's fine like 95% of the time and then there's a word that's a completely wrong word and changed the entire meaning of the sentence. that makes it REALLY hard to follow the story sometimes.Updates: N/AStory Development: 3 starsCharacter Design: 3 Stars (Decent MC, Father, Mother, and some villagers. Everyone else is crud (barely tolerable female lead)World Background: 2 stars (There hasn't been an explanation of the world yet. But from what I can see its a terrible world. In a world where literacy grants power there are actually illiterate people. Also for some bizarre reason, there are two villages like 45 minutes away from each other by a fast walk being forced to share a food supply by hunting and they don't plant crops. Also, there are demons... Yeah. Dunno crud about them just that the MC randomly punched one unconscious no explanation. Also, there are vicious beasts that somehow have DAO powers without reading. Oh, and demons don't have to read either! They gain DAO powers from eyeballs in their forehead... Wait so this is a world where reading is power for everyone BUT animals, non-humans, and other species? How on earth did humans survive?! Reading is NOT an easy skill in the beginning! Also where did those books come from!?
For all of you defending Qidian I feel bad for you I'm not going to insult you or anything i just feel bad. This novel is translated by the owner of WW and he translates 10 chapters a week for his website for no money just what the people give him on his patreon. Then along comes Qidian and steals almost all of WW novels including this one. I don't know how much work goes into translation but I know it isn't little so when someone steals literally years of your work then gets insulted for it is kind of rude and ingnorant. I know Qidian is in the wrong because how would they be in the right. These are the facts and if you still refuse to listen then so be it
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