I have read it until chapter 25 or 24 and the novel is really good. Characters pretty likeable we don't see a lot charecters but the people we saw until now is fun to read, a lot of action from the very start like a lot and different concept or plot that I didn't saw in any other novel's at least not yet. There are two minor problems which probably could be fixed and even if it does not fix novel is good enough that you probably wouldn't care. The first one when Mc is thinking his thought's writing "like this" but also conversations writing "like that" if his thoughts writing 'like this' might had been better but it is not a big deal as the story itself is really good. Second minor problem is. There is really a lot action from very start. Without knowing anything about the things happening around Mc decides, helps and finishs things that might be needed more thought's and time. There might be argument about if he had time but even then it might had been better if he was more careful about things when deciding what to do about all of the things happening around but it can ve overlooked as again I at least seeing myself that the novel is good enough so it is making me forgive or forgot those two minor problems which if fine at least by me. Thank you for the time spent on the novel author and take care.
Thanks for the interesting story
Nice plot. Read something different after a while. The story is developing in a goob way. The characters are described well but the surrounding should be addressed a bit more. This is a good novel overall. So would love to read more.
Although this is my first novel ever written on here, I believe I have outdone myself so far. Its definitely nowhere near the best; however, it has gone farther than I expected it to be. I still have plenty of ideas and many more chapters to come! If you’d like to tell me something that I can improve on in future chapters, please let me know by leaving a review below!Thanks!
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I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It takes a really interesting concept and manipulates it in a way that's really enjoyable to read as a reader.The MC is a bit naive, but its quite understandable given that he's 5 years old. The story melds a combination of humor, action and drama all into one plot. The characters are three-dimensional and easy to connect with as a reader, giving the book depth.My only "pet peeve" about this book is the story development. While its still good, there are a few aspects that feel just slightly rushed and not super thought-out (but that's the perfectionist in me talking).Otherwise, I would recommend that you read this. You will not be disappointed. Props to the author!
So sad to see such a good story get abandoned. The frequency that this happens on here is frustrating. Just like another story I was reading that stopped being updated, this was well developed while it lasted.
A very hot head and a very weak MC who has no control over his emotions.The first thing he does after transmigrating is not to understand the word but falls for a adult women buy thinking through his lower brain.
It's a nice and laidback story with a decent pace, as most other slice of life type story usually gets stuck and start to feel repetitive after about 50+ chapters into the story. But simply put this one doesn't feel asrepetitive like most others.
Don't read this story unless you want to be disappointed.By that I mean, the author has dropped it after only 21 chapters.Which isn't good news in general. Let alone because this story had marvelous potential. Some great characters, lots of humor and a steady pace where you got information and things happened, but you didn't get overwhelmed. Which as many authors and readers know, can be difficult to manage.If the author ends up coming back when things in RL have settled down and continues this story. Then I would highly recommend giving it a go. Otherwise read it and enjoy while knowing disappointment is quickly ahead as it suddenly stops as things start to get really interesting.
This is a great story. I've always like bl series but it rarely appears. Now I've found a great work but it seems to not update at all. Truly unfortunate! I was anticipating the daily updates. I've been waiting for daily updates but none appeared. Is this series in not ongoing? ???
i'm now current at chapter 18 and i would like to start off by saying this is a very well-written story and encouraging anyone checking out the reviews to just give it a read already.the pacing is slow, but not unpleasantly so. the author has clearly planned out in advance what events need to be shown and has hit each of them with purpose.the characters are enjoyable, though a bit flat. the hero is a child of interesting circumstances, but his personality is the classic dutiful son. his sisters are a bit more interesting, personality-wise, but they don't get as much focus as Hei does. i'll be looking forward to their development in the future.the writing quality is a bit rough. grammatical errors pop up here and there, pronouns get mixed up, and occasionally the author uses the wrong name by accident; but honestly, it's above average for webnovel so take that as you will.altogether it's been an enjoyable ride. if you are a fan of cultivation stories, this one will certainly scratch that itch.