Hey there! Author here.I just wanted to thank everyone who give this novel a try.-----This is a story about, Ziro Edens, who had everything one would need in life. His father was a multi-billionaire tycoon, and his mother was a queen of the country. He was intelligent, athletic, handsome, and the crown prince who would soon become the next king.He had a childhood friend whose beauty could rival any princess. There was nothing more he needed in life, and he just wanted to spend the rest of his life in peace with his childhood friend— whom he loved with all his heart.One day, after receiving an anonymous call, he lost everything and later disappeared. But his childhood friend never stopped searching for him.After a year, he walked into the classroom to attend the class, and everyone else in his school acted as there was nothing wrong. Later, his childhood friend found out the world’s time had reverted back to the day Ziro received the phone call, and she was the only one who had retained the memory of the previous timeline.MC (Ziro Edens) is a Male.
I stopped at around 80. Too many dumb things happen not to mention the CONSTANT POV changes thought the story. How are you supposed to focus on the story when every other chapter is about different characters that have literally no impact on the story as it is now. When the mc made an absolutely insane deal I just couldn't read anymore. Who in their right mind would make a deal where he owed an open ended favor to not just 1 person, but 4. The worst part is that what he got in return was nowhere near worth it. The story had my attention at the beginning but just got more difficult to enjoy. The story is probably good but it hit every little thing that I hate to see in a novel.
I love your book Armipotent so I will give this book a 5 star. I hope it will have a steady update and I hope the best for you Author_san!.....
Good so far Author. There are a few grammatical mistakes and the formatting is a bit off but it's good. Maybe you could find an editor to edit these chapters.
first time i see something so bad in my life, all this story doenst seem to have any sense the didnt give anything out he is so plain sadly...........
I'm still waiting for "Devil chicken stealer
Average cliche Novel with a typical amount of chinese nationalism. The world building and character depth could be better.Since there are no continous realeases right now i won't comment on that but the translation quality (up to chapter 40) is seriously lacking in my opinion.
This was a great story and while though it had its slow point and repeated chapters at times the story was still great and worth the read through.
Instead of progressing the story, author is showing his writing skills by explaing every single event usi g 2 chapters, MC sneeze and 2 chapters gone, MC sh** and 3 chapters gone,MC wipes his a** 2 more chapters gone.... end of your week!
It's almost 2 months. They said they will find a new translator...But now...It seems all just illusion. Too bad such a GOOD novel wasted. I used to expect this novel everyday and every time I open Q in my phone. But now....sigh...
Translation: 5Excellent, and not just because of this site. Will be looking at other works by this translator.Updates: 5Hey, 100 uploads within hours of each other? Lets pile the pressure and see whether this rate will be maintained. If not...we can always do another review...this one with less stars...[yeah, I'm talking to your mr Translator]Story Dev'p: 3Story officially - for me that is - picks up right around chapter 41. The rest is the usual "trash young master with stupendous comprehension but incapable of cultivating due to some unknown reason but right about the time some internal conflict with the clan arises his issue is resolved etc etc". Then of course, there is the ubiquitous 'clan extermination to give MC motivation' and escape into the wilds etc etcAs of the 41st chapter, I like the twist. Usually you have the MC's clan wiped out before he engages in retaliation. Here, he has no direct relationship with the clan he was ordered to destroy save for the obvious link they [destroyed clan] had with his own enemies. Most authors like justifying the MCs actions [save for that psychotic in Reverend Insanity] so it was refreshing to see him as the aggressor in this instanceXcter design: 4Talks to himself sometimes [I think...skimmed thru most of the first forty chapters]. He has something of a personality though; didn't get foolishly angry at someone's challenge, bows his head, isn't immediately compelled to overcome every other genius...All in all, not too badWorld Background: 4Initially gave it a 4 but dropped it back down to 3 then raised it to 4 once again.Reason?Got confused with cultivation levels. No real description of people or the world [though this could be because I skimmed thru the opening chapters but that is the author's fault]It still gets a 4 because of the explanation for comprehension levels. I truly despise meatheads and this novel is keeping far from that bad business of some cultivator only piling up mass so that they can drive their spear with greater force [looking at you Dong Bo Xue Ying and Ling Ming and Ancient Strengthening and the rest of you sorry lot]
I very much like this type of fast cultivation and super op mc. The only thing missing in this novel is a good romance.