Great translator. But the author drop it after setting up a time travel main plot... Who does that? What wrong with him? I feel like I wasted my time, especially when it was such a good premise.
I liked the writing style and progression of the story. The characters are interesting in their own ways and the overall concept of the narrative is enjoyable to read. However, I don't know whether this is fanfic or since I've never read one. But Naruto's lore is mentioned a lot in the story
I read a bit ahead so i can tell that this is a great story and it gets even better and crazier, despite everything it's beginning is a little tame compared to later on, and as someone who read a lot of pancakes works i can tell she came a long way and improved a lot so this as one of her latest works stands out as quite solid.
Everyone in their reviews are giving good commments, So i decided to give good one also, , First chapter is good, didn't read rest yet, but keep up, Very good job?
I would love to read your books but from how many times u have dropped the others I’m not ready to go through it again, maybe when it gets to about 300 I’ll come back
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Well, this is a good start to a story but it's good to make sure you stick to your schedule. You owe us 3 chapters. Hopefully you're already in development
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How do you write something great than this? Like seriously! I wish I could write like that too! Anyways, you guys should definitely read this story! Ciao!
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Tem muito potencial no mundo, eu recomendaria que depois que acabar ou chegar longe na historia dar uma revisada e ver o quando você melhorou na escrita, porque esse mundo tem muito a ser explorado.