Keep it up, author, nice choice of words and descriptions. the setting and plot are vivid and no hard grammar was used. ❤.., ..................
Well well well the story is well written and I'm already in love with the plot. The description of the characters is straight forward and simple, The first person point of view makes it more interesting, I loved your story and I am definitely gonna read this one till the end ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The summary is fake, got my hopes up for nothing............................................................................................................
Writing is pretty good, the updates seem to be coming out at a regular pace, the story seems to be developping at a good pace as well, I would recommend giving it a look.
The more the story progresses the more boring it becomes.Till now I do not understand what is the value of the system. It is like some bounty on his head and for months he is not progressing in cultivation. Man, this is supposed to be a system novel.
lemme be real with ya improve ur synopsis
As an author, this collection is a sort of mental doodle for me. Occasionally I will have ideas that wouldn’t make for a proper manuscript, or larger writing, but that work well for short snippets. That is what these are. I do hope that everyone enjoys these and can draw inspiration.
GOOD LUCK, THE TITLE AND THE COBER ITSELF SENT A GOOSEBUMPS ON ME SO I THINK YOU WILL BE SUCCESSFUL IN YOUR ENDEAVOUR, KEEP WORKING HARD.
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Good start and quick lemons but mc personality is sometime a little badWorth trying it out ?
Good job author .... Really made the story intriguing.. . I want to read the next chaps faster... I liked how you detailed the characters ... It's really good..
i really dont know what to say but i'll just say i am a bit dissapointed with the development of story so far the betrayal thta was foreshadowing is taking too long