Hello readers. I’m the author of ‘The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance’. I’m going to use the review panel to write about a few things I wasn’t certain where to put before. Also, please ignore my rating. I just shamelessly put it at 5 stars, because why not, right? As of now I’ve got honestly no idea how long the novel will be. I’ve got most of the plot figured out, but as of right now I’m still not sure if everything of it will be used unchanged. I’ve been writing now for quite some time, but it’s my first time trying to put my writing out there, and in a foreign language to that. Because of that, while I am trying to check grammar, I may make some mistakes. In case anybody sees some, feel free to point it out to me. I will gladly fix it. About the story itself, since I know that’s probably what is the most interesting for a lot of people, here’s some information's. Even though it’s a novel with an Apocalypse oriented world, I’m not really a fan of fighting, or rather my abilities to write fights aren’t good enough. Because of that I will be trying to take the novel in a slightly different direction, in which my female lead will be more focused on her daily life, and perhaps what she knows best – business. That’s why her abilities won’t really be supper offensive, and she herself, even though she is called the Zombie Queen, won’t be super overpowered. About romance. There will be some, and the main couple won’t take long to get together after meeting each other. But the thing is, our ML is going to need some time to come out. So, don’t expect him to be running around FL too soon. I think that’s all for now. xWangan
A story with an interesting story arc with a dark and depressing undertone in it.Jason is an interesting protagonist to read, his backstory was dark and compelling but he kinda gave me that ‘guy-who-always-gets-the-ladies’ vibes. Jason has a personality, which some writers tend to forget to add. Alina took me a while to like, it’s probably because I found her POV a bit cliché but like Jason, she has personality and quirks. I’m actually curious if this is Harem or not, I lost count re-checking the tags just to see if it was a harem. The side characters were decent, I like how Michelle has a great personality, and usually, some writers ignore the side characters and don’t even bother making them real and relatable.I love the world-building, the writer took the time to make the story tangible and real. It was exciting and it made me want to ask for more. I was curious how the world works and I love every minute of it. The story does feel like a manuscript (especially reading Alina’s POV), it felt like I was reading a script. There were more dialogues than paragraphs. There were some parts it kind of feel like cheesy but I didn’t mind at all. The story is full of flashbacks, it sucks that Webnovel doesn’t have formatting styles here because I got confused when suddenly I’m reading a backstory without any warning. Some chapters were short, so it kind of threw me off, the story does have that ‘anime’ ambiance to it. I could visualize some scenes especially when it comes to reading Jason’s POV, which I’m totally happy about it since my mind usually takes a while to see the story. I love your cover! But I’m a graphic designer ??? a font hoe. I couldn’t help myself but suggest, using a serif font because it makes the cover more elegant, serious, and formal. Condensed serif font would work. If you want I could suggest some fonts to use.Overall, this story is worth reading especially, if the reader is into anime and urban fantasy with immersive story arc.
Give this a shot. The concept is very intriguing, the plot and the characters has considerable strength to it as well. So far, the Main Character seems pretty decent, a stable mind that can think which doesn't randomly offend every being it sees. The cheat item is also kind of dope and has different twist and quirk which is not present on your average xianxia.
Nothing but **** story is ****. Sorry its my opinion ''''''''''""""""''"'"""""''"'""'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''"'''''"'''''"''''''"''’'''''ज्ञ''''''''''''''
It is a decent novel up till you reach the point where he starts bending over to please some unreasonable females I mean he almost took a fireball to the face which attracted a boar which he then had to dodge and his reaction is a mild argument before handing equipment to the cause of it
*Sob *Sob *Sob *Sob *Sob *Sob If only there's no need to use coins to unlock chapter . . . . . Damn my wallet is crying *Sob *Sob *Sob *Sob *Sob *Sob
I have no problem with the story quality. It is interesting for me and I can see the passion of the writer. My advice are to not overly use commas in one sentence. Maybe lessen them by making it to another sentence. I also want to suggest to change your dialogues into this "You are amazing," He said in a low voice. (if it was an active convo) but use "You are amazing." He said in a low voice. (If it is the end of convo). Well, good luck! Your novel will reach its success as I see the potential! Kudos! ? peace ✌️ I don't want to be critical though......Have a nice day!
Summary: Basically **** plot, but the **** is terrible and the story makes negative sense. Also the author seems to want to make the readers as angry as possible. Don't waste your time reading this story. I imagine the author is a hormone filled angsty **** on crack based on how erratic the story proceeds, and the immensely crude rendition of any female characters. I have to commend the translator on the translation quality, but even they have given up on the story at chapter 125. I've read ahead, and I can totally relate: We read fiction for entertainment but this story is so far fetched it's infuriating. Every second paragraph is an completely unexpected twist that the m/c seemingly will never overcome but then the next, he will MIRACULOUSLY solve it. The worst part is 99% OF THIS COULD BE AVOIDED IF THE MC JUST DID THE LOGICAL ACTION AT THE TIME!!! So I'm dropping this novel, and for good riddance, I'd say...
Uhh.. doesn't this have a movie called 'Fighter of Destiny'? being Chen Chansheng as the MC heading out for the capital to study and thus began rising to prominence?
a good novel well written as well as it's gu worms...................................................................................................
Pretty bland and boring novel with a world that doesn't make much sense. Don't know why such bad novels are selected. Mc is fairly 2d and side characters all react in illogical ways
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