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'…Moon, did you really pay attention when I was thinking before?'
Abusive MLI that never redeems himself. MC magically falls in love with said abuser for no reason. She literally hates him for the entire novel until he's (forced) to send her a love letter.The story ends very abruptly with a very dissatisfying ending.
The first light novel I’ve ever read like a lot of people. It was definitely a great read especially for a first timer and really got me into reading light/web novels. The story is great and I love almost all the characters and hope that the story continues as we enter the finale.
It would have been best if he was a winger no one cares about too much assist or so called assist king Sad he isn’t write another one about a winger and we will read ok On that bye
The narrative is solid, but one aspect that doesn't sit well with me is how noticeable the plot armor is, especially when the protagonist, despite not being inherently powerful, seems to escape unscathed. It's particularly evident when her partner, who possesses remarkable strength, effortlessly dispatches all foes with a single hit. This creates a discernible reliance on plot armor that feels a bit too apparent for my liking.
Everything is perfect for a fanfiction quality.Positives:I like the characters and happy that some side characters get a background instead of being only MC background. Update stability is great and the world background is fine as nothing much happened yet.Very Minor negatives:need a bit of improvement in the writing quality, I think proofreading would be a good suggestion.Story development is too slow in some chapters because of the long explanations and practising jutsu chapters. It's still fine, you can skim read through them. As of chapter 39, nothing much happened but this fanfic has a lot of potential, so keep up the work Author ✌️
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Ainda não li o livro, mas a história parece ser boa. Me interessei.
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Average Novel...there are already a novel like this in orginal and that is popular.bit better then this but mostly Same.so I don't see spend my money and Time on something that already available in this site
I really enjoy the development of the MC and the ability he has to adapt. Its a very easy read would recommend to anyone who wants a fun story to read.