Too dry for me, Where's the loli? I want a loli. Sigh, such a disappointment. Really disappointed, what to type though? It is still less than 140 huh?
stories are condescending....good story.
This is a goooood good novel. I meant it, I really do. This should be far more than a 5 star good novel. Why did I give a 4.8 you say? Because the only downside is (was?) the update stability and I can't rate anything more than 5 stars. This novel may seem like its just an original xianxia novel etc. but its really not. The author has solid writing skills and has managed to write this novel in a way that isn't all repetitive and fighting over beauties etc in most xianxia novels. No, it has beautiful story building, awesome characters, pretty solid world atm and, again, writing quality is superb. The number of complaints I have are in the negative numebrs even including my issue with the updates. And even then, I'll take it for this awesome story.
Need more progress and more descriptions of the outside world
Great book in terms of world building and realistic characters, there are some big issues with spelling and grammar as well as the characters lack of imagination to the point where the readers feel embarrassed for him. Worth a read purely because of the world building
Yeah I gave a 5 star review because the book is worth it, so give it a trial. The author captivates you with her plot , her characters and the story line is fresh giving you something to read that hasn't been over produced
The overall work is pretty good but there is some things that it lacks to stand out. For one, your starting theme is very cliche in which the main character gets dumped by a love interest, which initiates the protagonist to acquire a special ability. In order to amend this error, develop a groundbreaking plot to draw in the readers.
great story and thank you for novel . .
Reading the first 5 chapters, I want to point out something. Jake Lin, a defected human who can't use his right hand but is a genius at mathematic. It seem like everything was normal as he got home to see his older sister, playing that popular game and possibly became a professional gamer. Then it all went spiral and out of control when she decided to use some code which caused a huge disaster and Jake Lin became unconscious, only to wake up with a "system". So far, this storyline is intriguing and kept me interested but one flaw thing about this novel is the formatting. It got a little bit difficult to understand when the conversation is jumbled up in one paragraph. I suggest the author to separate the paragraph into 1-2 sentences for us reader to read it clearly and not get confused. I wished to say more but so far with only 5 chapters out, I can only wait for more to see the development and how Jake Lin will utilize his system to benefit him such as, getting rid of the handicapped status.
Good popcorn reading, feels too conversational.. not enough Polish.Feels like the author is so invested in having fun that they're not.. writing, it has its place
A great storyline, i love the whole image the Author has created. The words flow so well making each read admirable and the pace of the story is steadily, appreciable because of how the story is structured. A great read
well written book and could be improved in a few places but overall a great novel. ... .... ., .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. . . ... ....... .. ... . ... ..