This a great werewolf packed story. It jumps straight into death and tragedy which sets the scene well. All in all a good book with lots of thought gone into it :)
The story is pretty good but the translation is letting it down a lot. The phrases and wording are especially jarring to read. I know I'm complaining but if you're gonna translate a book for people to pay to read, at least make an effort!
Currently at chapter 632. Story has no substance. There's no real goal, it feels like the author doesn't know which way he's heading. Too many Arcs with no real plot. Basically, there's no momentum at all. No excitement. The villains get killed with no real satisfaction because...again, no momentum. Even the romance has no substance. The harem has no glue. All the side characters doesn't leave you with any impression at all. If i have to describe this in one word: Bland.
The story really just jumps into it. It's almost jarring how the MC starts ranting about turning into a pretty girl. It almost makes me suspect the original was a male. Then it goes on about Japanese light novels and makes a lot of references to them.It's like reading a parody and it might put you off at first. The synopsis made it seem a tiny bit more serious but nope. Slap the comedy or parody tag if one ever comes out.Her inside mental voice is funny and exaggerated but her actions in real life are real bland. Like a normal person, like a side character. Anyway the MC decides that studying is too hard and being a **** start is good. Just kidding hehe.There are SO MANY light novel references in the novel. If your not familiar you might miss out on some humor because it's not always obvious. Just kidding they come right out and slap you in the face. Pah! Reference! Pah! Parody! Pah! Light novels! Many parody references right to your face.Her power is she can turn into any female character and play her roll. It has limitations, the more detail and effort the author put into the character the less control she has over her actions.I think the story is very funny. It has a lot of references I understand but I read a lot of junky novels.
What is this even? He gets company shares like nothing. Where do they come from, you cant just get 70% of a company. Where do these shares come from? The former share holders all died at the same moment? If you are using a world setting that is supposed to be close to reality you have to use some logic while writing.And how do you think people are supposed to get an impression on the story with 5 free chapters? No one unlocks/buys chapters to a book he doesnt no anything about on this platform.
i have read this before, I love the money and the skills, what I do hate is the tantananan~drum roll pls. the HAREM! guy suddenly becomes a big shot and felt like he could have the world,(he does, in future chaps maybe) he tells them he has a gf but they act like they didn't hear him, the proceed to act like brainless lovesick golddigging fools. question is, do you remember you have one(a gf?) or does she know you're not that great? just (act like) another reckless second/third gen. he got the skills, the money, but is he worth it? everything other than the harem, I love.
This is my second review of my story,I have manage to know the reason why many readers dislike this story so I have to clear a misunderstanding so that the readers that would read my story would know what type of story this is.Spoilers ahead, Don't read this if you don't want to get spoiled.--------------------The First Problem, The main problem that I saw in my readers is the System. They hate when the system gives a quest towards the MC with reasonable rewards that would tempt the MCFirst, The System would give quest to MC. So expect the system to be me(Author) trying to give my MC skills via system. I know that it is not good but bear with me.Second, The System isn't the MC's slave and the MC is not the System's slave. The relationship between them is pretty much normal, The MC worked for the rewards he want to get.Third, The Problem of the second problem. The Readers expect that the MC's system was given by some sort of ROB being or GOD himself but sorry the system didn't come from them.The MC isn't a special guy who save a girl getting hit by a truck, A guy who save the world, A hero, A guy who fought valiantly, And A guy who pathetic which took a god to save him(Via Wishes). My MC is just a person who wants to survive, He had his problems and when he was given power he would change.The System is a sentient powerful being that could bend the universe as its will. The MC is the current contractor of the System, Unlike most of the leveling system which makes the System in it came from some sort of powerful being.My system is the powerful being. It chose the MC as its owner so the MC would be grateful towards it rather than be spiteful since he was given a chance to be Reborn, Time travel, and Get stronger.--------------------The Second Problem, The First chapter of the story must have the readers be misunderstood that the MC is some kind of idiot but this kind of personality would cease to exist in the later chapters.The First Chapter personality is some kind of a euphoria since the MC discovered that he time travelled back in time. Also with the system it is hard to be not excited.The MC's old life was very trashy so a second chance is basically like a water for a man who was thirsty in the middle of the desert.The Idiot Personality would disappear in the later chapters.--------------------The Third Problem, It isn't a problem but many readers would asked me one thing."Is the MC Evil?"My answer is yes, He is not an edgy evil who would destroy the world or make the world as his puppet.He is a tamed evil that would do anything to achieved his goals, Although he would do anything as long as it didn't involved his Love ones.The Reason I put evil in the tags is that the MC would kill people and he would see life as something that can be thrown like trash. He doesn't value the life of other people other than himself and his love one'sMy MC is a scum, He had an obsession over one girl but I wouldn't call it simping.The Girl that I am mentioning is the Female lead of my story.The MC was saved by the FL during the apocalypse, The both of them got together and survive through the apocalypse together. The FL was chased by powerful people so she didn't want the MC to be hurt by her own problems so she left.The Both of them promised to meet each other in the later years but the Promised disappeared when the FL died. The MC is in the middle of insanity as he was just trying to survive in this world to meet the FL again but fate punch him in the face.The MC didn't commit suicide but he died when he was surrounded by Millions of zombies, because of the rumors that he was a companion of the FL which is true. The MC's acquaintances betrayed him which led to his death.The only person the MC trust was the FL, The story begins in a new timeline and the MC met the younger FL.He was obsessed over her but instead of trying to get to love him, He just waited for the FL to loved him. He turn this obsession to be a goal which makes him harsh to the FL to teach her how to survive on her own.--------------------The Fourth Problem, The Kingdom building. I heard a reader that a kingdom building would make the MC worked for the people but no.The Kingdom the MC is building is mostly his own created races via gene perfecting or gene editing. So the Kingdom the MC is building isn't a human kingdom but a kingdom that has many types of races like Cat girls, Snake girls, And more this is also vice versa there would be men in it.The MC would be deemed as some sort of a God Emperor of Man(Search it in Warhammer 40k) but with many races on his grasp. He would be seen as a god in the Kingdom building but he is very powerful which was why his own created races thought of him as their god.--------------------Sorry for the readers that though that he will conquer humanity, He won't bring any human with him other than his love one's who are very powerful.The MC thought of humanity as some sort of complex thing for him.Just like what the MC said in some chapter that I wrote."Creating a new race is better than humans, The humans will evolve to be a perfect race but I will not babysit them until they reach that day. I could just create cat girls or new races that would only be loyal to me."--------------------Anyway I hope that the story would fit the taste of my fellow readers
now this IS intriguingeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
chapter 9?
I've been trying to slow myself from finishing because i dont want it to end. i really hope there will be more.
Books written by Muse don't really need a review as her stories & writing take u on the journey like u r a part of the book.U start loving / hating characters & the updates become like a part of air that need 2 breathe 2 live.With each book she writes,she makes us fall more in love with her writing.
Loved this one as much as the first two in the series. Excellent storytelling made it difficult to put down and get some rest!