Hello everyone, this is my first novel in writing an Eastern Fantasy story as well as System. I hope I can do it well.Actually I'm still afraid to write stories outside of my own comfort zone. Because actually I call this a challenge.
Just started this novel, it has some interesting plot. But unfortunately the writing quality is shit. The Author/translator + editor do not know basic English. Past and present tense is mixed up everywhere. For some reason the word 'a' Is missed out everywhere aswell. Pisses me off.
Ok since this novel isn't getting enough attention, imma drop a real good review for it.First of all, to all those people out there yearning for a Male-lead romance that appeals to the male reading population then this is the novel for you.It's a sweet romance. The MC's future wife reincarnates back in time and the MC can somehow hear her thoughts.This leads to various cute moments where the wifey is inwardly treating the MC as her hubby but pretending to be reserved on the outside.The MC knows all of this and just laughs and dotes at her actions.It is NOT a harem. It is not sexist, racist or any other sort of BS you see in some of these novels.The best part is that while romance is the main focus the characters are not just a one-dimensional fluff producing machines.They have their goals and aspirations and are working together for it.By using the future knowledge as a cheat they are aiming to improve their lot in life.While it's not some grand scheme.It works as a nice slice of life as it taps into the basic human instinct of doing well in life.Working together leads to the deepening of their bond and chemistry.Anyways the romance is great.So guys don't be shy and embrace your inner fluff and try to help get this novel picked.....I sure hope that nobody who knows me reads this review cause it's Hella embarrassing ?
are you kidding me the only book I liked was the one that didn't get picked
Honestly I dont know what to say. One thing I do know though is that this isnt much of a system novel and it doesnt try to get serious. Its full-on wish fullfilment and theres no random young master that wants to make life hard for the mc. I dont know how itll be possible for this novel to even get past the 200chapter mark unless it adds in powers and martial arts for some reason.Mc went from a slightly realistic and commendable person, to "haha laid and girls go brrrr" in the span of 20 chapters. It will also clearly have some harem in it. Not really my thing but if you dont mind any of those things that I mentioned, then feel free to read this novel
Whats happening to webnovel. Once upon a time, I looked forward to my Fridays because of the great books that came out every week. As time passed, the quality dropped slowly, but as Webnovel already had all the good books, this was understable. At some point the gems will run out, and you will have to wait for new ones to be made.But nowadays, the quality of the books webnovel are putting out every week are absolute trash.Absolute garbage. mindless plots, tropes and cliches that have been recycled a thousand times over. I would have to go back months to find a batch of books that had a character with the slightest depth to it.Please Webnovel, give us some good books.
at i was exited about a nonhuman MC. I was expecting a python turning into dragon story, but its just a log about the MC killing and eating anything on sight, and its uncomfortable to be honest, 20 chapters in and he is already eating humans, yes HUMANS although he is a snake now how is this different than a cannibal freak , and ofcourse they were from USA at this point i was already pretty sick of reading it but i forced myself to read until ch 39 AND guess what he met his former subordinates who were in fact responsible for his murder, is it was a murder his brother planned all this MC dosen't know about the brother part, MC ofcourse eat them all saying they are exp, overall this story somehow disgusts me and makes me uncomfortable. hopefully its not selected and waste the precious spot of other better books on the shelf.
The quality is great despite a very scant amount of errors here and there. I would say the quality of writing is superb which embraces details, but doesn't stray from the story to go on long expositions. I also would love if it was released slightly quicker, but the author has stated that he like quality over quantity, I am in awe of that. Some authors just think about cranking out as many chapters as possible, but this author really takes his time as you can see with the length of his paragraphs. The story is going at a pace which leaves you satisfied and wanting more to know what happens next. Characters are unique and I'm loving the brotherhood element that is going on, which in most cases with other novels, is never mentioned or just really badly expressed with superficial relationships, but I genuinely enjoy these characters' relations. The world background is good, however, I think it's this book's weakest point, but I simply don't care! The characters and their stories are enticing enough for me to come back everyday to see if another chapter has been released.Anybody that is reading this review, give this novel a go. You won't regret it!
Author I just binged this in 2 days, absolutely incredible, I'm in love
Yo Author where are more chapters ? ? ? ..................................................................................................
Eventhough I say that author placed some kind of spell to make people to never stop reading ( check his title he's using the void) the book felt the same as other books in the beginning but its definitely carrying something unique in it that makes me want to read it (SPELL!) whether it comes to characters or the story itself, it just makes me want to read more but the chapters are too small. They literally make me feel big.Great work and i hope to read more in the future.
when I read the synopsis, I guessed that it'll be a face-slapping novel. but never would I have thought that it was in a literal way. the MC has been slapping people faces left and right. ???