I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You're wondering why you're still reading this8. You saw that mistake.... Right? (on 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said saw you, not you saw13. I also skipped 114. You got tricked15. I'm wasting your time...NOW GO AND READ THE STORY! You're missing out!
Didn't manage to read far due to many grammatical errors. .................................................................................................
Shameless author here. Of course, I will give myself a positive review. If I didn't like what I write, why would I keep writing? I hope to be making fewer grammatical mistakes but if there are still any, just comment and I'll fix it. ?✍️♥️?
Interesting, excited to find out the next chapters, the author gets more attention as the content becomes more breathtaking. Starting to be a fan
First of all, the title "The Trap Called Equality" really caught my attention. Since there's only a few chapters so far I'm not sure about future stability of updates, but so far its a full five :) The grammar and spelling could be proof-read but overall, it's a pretty nice plot. Good luck and great job!
Redoing the review as of chapter 13!For some reason of didnt update the chapter I have ready.Anyhow: Well written and detailled story! Has some infodumps but the info does matter, so I'm kind of Oke with it for now. I want some romance *since it is tagged*. I really love the interaction so far! There are quite a bit of monologues though..Its better written than alot that I've seen! Looking forward to the rest
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I don't think this is a terrible idea, and the story development is okay. However, I can't get past the fact that the grammar in this story isn't very well developed. I know not every author can hire a proofreader for every chapter, but this webnovel from the start honestly feels a little rushed on the author's part. If you're the type of person that's okay with some bad grammar, this could be an okay story. I just can't focus on the story when my immersion is being constantly broken by present and past tense switching around, when in narration only past tense should be used unless referring to a character asking himself a question about his/her future. I really feel like the idea for this webnovel is great, but when the other reviews say it is childish, that's probably because it feels like something a teenager might have written at times.
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I read it to 1~201chapter. You'll hate mc choosing the girl to become his owner than bronze knight and i understand him too choice her bc its a girl ? but still the girl become quite annoying. Don't worry the girl will not be his owner.His owner will be a teenager boy with shounen personality( better than that red hair girl except bronze knight he is the best). He's quite naive , always betrayed, not a pervert. Mc(the ring)He's a simp for red hair girl, No offense he's not smart. But he will become better(well if you had a patience that if you can?)Im reading this bc the world is interesting.
Is it wrong for me to state facts? The fact I'm stating is that this novel is good. Really good , I'm not lying , slap me headless until thunder strikes , this novel is a good read.