Got to chapter 64 now. The “supposed” start. I don’t mind lengthy explanations, so no problem in taking your time world building. The writing quality (grammar and structure) is good. Bad parts I really don’t enjoy and might make me drop:-The space out of the MC because he is talking with himself and forgets he is actually interacting with another character.- The length of the chapters is reduced to a point where I’m pretty sure it’s the bare minimum one can consider a chapter (around the second volume it starts happening, probably to make you unlock more?- The trying to be funny but simply annoying AI. If this is the same in following chapters for me it’s the worst of all the negative things. It’s supposed to help, not annoy or prank.- There is a part that the author had to step in and announce it is not Plot Armour. Maybe the special ability, not 100%, but maybe. But the animal companion with the lions memory? Really?-For now that’s all, I’ll redo if I change my opinion. For better or worse.
Asking for stones for this is an insult to all authors.You should try to write the plot on a piece of paper then see if what you write next actually fits with what is already there
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you really just can't say that the story is garbage by reading the first 3 of 1088 chapters of the novel then rating it 1.5 star. sure the quality in translation is in need of editing but this novel is a completed work deserving of its luster of praise. so i hope those who gave their irresponsible ratings and reviews will update it as the translation soon catches up till the completion, i'm not asking for high ratings but a reasonable one because at the end of the day we have all different tastes for stories.
It's not completely unreadable. I finished the whole thing.I regret spending the time on it. It's longer than it needs to be, the characters are absolutely one-dimensional, the plot devices are re-hashed MULTIPLE times, the author repeats the same information over and over and over and over, and the plot armor of the MC could take a shot from the death star without a scratch. There's zero thought put into the actual measurements of...anything (a sword strike few thousand times the speed of light is apparently totally able to miss somebody that is ten TRILLION kilometers tall at point blank range. That's trillion, with a T. Also, TRILLIONS of years go by in the blink of an eye, multiple times. Also, the ending was boring enough I would find myself skimming the text to pick out key words. I love to read, if the end of your novel is less of a "what happens next!" and more of a "bah, I'm 88% in on this 1400+ chapter novel, might as well take the time to finish" then you've failed as an author.It honestly felt like he was trying to pad the novel length, rather than actually improve the quality. Sometimes less is more.However, the translation quality was fantastic. There were some additional footnotes added to explain several of the more esoteric mythology introduced and that was certainly much appreciated.
It's boring and uncreative, and there's no real conflict anywhere. But you probably already knew that from looking at the summary.What you might not know is how badly translated this is. Have you every heard of the Wuxing realm? Ever had a MC cast a "supernormal knowledge spell"? Yeah, me neither.
The synopsis actually hooked me in. I don't regret reading this and I would highly recommend it! This plot is promising and has a lot of potential. This is added to library! Can't wait for more...
It's Good. Very very Good. Excellent. Perfect. Happy Happy. Super Good. Really really good. Please get chosen. There's not much Urban novel that is good in 2021.
This was pretty fun and confusing to ready. With the release of the latest Chapter though I can see that’s it’s taking a huge turn and I can’t wait to see where it’s headed!
story is fantastic and the way it develops ,I am quite bored of normal novels ,this one is really exciting and mc is really good later on in the story
Was this novel drop? Please update more chapters. I really want to read this novel. I wish this novel will have regular updates. Thanks you very much for the treat.
This is a very interesting book. The plot is interesting. The characters are also well developed. The author did a good work with the discription, it draws readers in. I really enjoyed reading this book