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Ch 46:Bei Dou has a crush! LOLAnd it’s so sweet to see that Pei Jin has been in love with Shi Ning this whole time! Stories like these make my heart happy ☺️
love this story, always a highlight of my day when I see it's notification pop up. Author, I truly appreciate all your effort you put into your work.
its a well thought out start to the novel, the two characters are well written.
i read the authors brothers novel.
so here i am, you should give it ago.
Finally decided to make a review for this novel.
First off I am caught up to chapter 507.
For me one of the few I personally would give a complete five star for as it has exceeded all my expectations for character, world building and power system.
Character: Extremely well done everyone has enough depth to them. The mc is smart and watching how he uses his wits to beat the odds is truly satisfying. The main character uses everything at his disposal to gain power and survive in this deadly world. A lot of times a mc who is evil and doesn’t have attachments with other characters can get boring and monotonous as I will need to take a break before coming back to read more but I have not experienced it with this novel at any point.
The world is vast and we learn more as the mc does it does what is needed providing us with a place we want to learn more about and explore.
The power system is a bit complex and can be hard to grasp but is well thought out and the power is well earned each time. As the story progresses the power and abilities the mc gains become more and more interesting.
The story feels very natural on how it progresses and continues to improve where the stakes become higher but the rewards are as well.
I am not that great with reviews but I highly recommend on reading this.
Just amezing....love it....hoping for more sme syories frm u dear....
has potential. chapters are very repetitive to pad word count which is incredibly irritating but i like the idea behind the story, so i will stick it out to see where it goes.
I just discovered this little gem and you can be proud of it, hard things to say on this site but I find the idea of wanting to become a hero at all costs completely ridiculous and childish, no need for a cape and to run around New York to be a hero Helping people with his business is much better. I hope the MC is not going to be part of the Avengers otherwise it will ruin everything The Avengers are an unprofessional time bomb. It's just going to waste her time. He could hack into Wakanda and use the data to advance medicine and things. If he wants to wear a costume then he just has to do it for help IronMan with IronMonger and enjoy having arc reactors and other technological parts,Go to Harlem and steal Bruce's blood and fight the abomination, playing heroes will be a secondary objective but will give him a good image. Help spiderman with the goblin, and have Peter as employee. Developed W.E and beat Tony in his own Stark expo. Perfected B.W so SHIELD won't notice Baby photos and you loll, Make a believable story behind. SHIELDRA is going to want to search to manipulate him like Stark so watch the spy and have a real lab in his basement, surrounded by vibranium and impossible to hack for the SHIELD. put a tracker on the loki scepter and steal it from Hydra. Learn magic or build your own teleportation portal With these clear memories of the movies he can travel to different planets, Xander and steal stuff like the power stone on MORAG. Stealing alien technologies ect.Take out an element before Tony and take the glory, an alien element that already exists. Combination of nanotechnologies. Making a new team, the Avengers are not the only ones, CAge, Jessica, Daredevil, Spiderman, Save mutants and give them work and a suit with a hidden face and therefore secret identity. I can't wait to read more.
Am I in a dream or have I transmigrated to the world of cringe? I cannot fathom the sheer determination one must possess to write or TL this novel. For the love of god, I hope this was an intentioned parody or a satire.For those who wish to read the propagan- *oops* I mean novel-Cleanse your eyes and close your mind, for this novel has the singular power to revert your iq to that of a 10-year-old fanboy.RIP brain cells.RIP sanity.RIP eyes.RIP IQ.
To start with this story has a different way of going about things than most stories which isnt bad at all but being as light hearted as it has been it needs to either add a good amount of comedy or wit to carry it to betterment as only being lighthearted is horrible for a story in the long run.The personalities of the the mc and the women are fleshed out enough and frankly much better than the majority of the other webnovel novels have, but its gotten to mushy and the way the self confidence or any behaviour is shown between them has become repeated and is just making the story weak at this point, at this point the main characters need to be treated as normal people and behave normally rather than this stuff.The cultivation level jumping was already exaggerated and has since become just nonsense at this point since they got that chaos energy stuff, this has to been reduced at the divine realm to a normaler degree because rigjt now its just a pathetic joke the way theyre jumping entire realms. Just because every other novel makes the mc jump stages doesnt mean it has to be done and if it has to then certainly not like this.To summarize not bad for a novel just with issues which need to be fixed asap to stop it from becoming worse.
I really don't want webnovel to pick this up. If they pick this up then the following would occur:1) Every chapter after chapter 40 would be behind a pay wall2) Translation updates would start decreasing3) One sudden day, the novel will be on hiatus and there will be no updates for years(example: Dominating Sword Immortal, The daily life of the Immortal King)4) Henceforth, nobody is interested in the novel anymore and this novel would perish
This genre is quite new for me but I loved your story. I'm definitely adding this to my collection. I recommend this book to all the readers. You are a skilled author. All the best.
Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️Warning ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️Spoiler Alert !!!!!!!!!!!For those who had read Against The Gods prepare to be "TRIGGERED" because of the non-stop trouble coming after MC one after another without a second of delay(and i MEANT IT), beautiful women with past problems/troubles that just keep coming into the life of MC( i've no problem with the ones from his sect ), also his women(basically his entire sect) or those that he care get hurts while he gone even when he literally less than 1KM away from them they still get hurts without him knowing anything.Seriously, i'm really TTTTRRRRIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGEEEEEERRRREEEEEDDDD right now........
