'…Ah… I had my earphones on, so probably I missed out when you might have called for me!'
More please
Sparky was brought towards the ward for some minor treatments for his wounds. There, he met Mae who was watching Veronica doing her work in a curious face. Mae turned and noticed Sparky who was entering the ward. "Sparky! A-Are you ok..?" questioned Mae in a worried manner as she grabbed Sparky's arm and looked as his wounds.
When's the next chapter gonna come
Adam felt strange, looking at the bird in front of him. It didn't run away from him and just sat there.
outta nowhere and you destroyed our universe its annoying cuz you destroyed space-time and dimensional universe so i stepped up so dont be frustrated since i stepped up you are already dead heheh
yea i deropped book as soon as he was no longer mute what is the point of making him mute in the first place there was no point just a grab for more attention.
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I came to this novel with high expectations after reading the synopsis. It was a little bit of a letdown and this is why. "Follow him on his path as he tries to balance his past life's morals with this life's realities." This is a line from the synopsis at the time of this review. This line made me think "Ok, a cultivation novel without such a generic outlook on human interaction." I got a few chapters in and found out that the MC is the reincarnation of a war vet. This really made me excited.What let down my expectations is the fact that this novel is exactly the same as every other cultivation novel out on the market and even on this website. The main character either kills all his enemy or runs till he can kill all his enemies. There's always this generic "pull up the roots" type of mentality in these types of novels and while that phrase hasn't been said yet, the overall feel and context is there. Apart from the fact that there's barely any originality in the base subplot of the novel, I'm really happy with the overall writing quality that has been shown as of chapter 69. The character, while unagreeable by my standards, is at least three dimensional. There is "character" in the character if that makes sense. As for the other characters in the story, they feel rather unimportant and are easily forgotten. While reading up to chapter 69 I found myself forgetting which character is which, their names and relations to the MC. I think this was expounded by the fact that there's a large number of introductions to new characters rather quickly during this period of time. If I wanted to point out one aspect of the novel that I really thoroughly enjoyed it would probably be the MC interactions with what I can tentatively call the FMC. While introduced late in the story, she makes a big change in the overall feel of the story as a whole. I feel like the romance between them is rather forced, it isn't forced in a way that I would consider unappealing. There's always some mysticism in writing a good romance and getting the subtle interactions just right to bring about the effect that you want. It's definitely not the best interaction, but it is reasonably high on the scale, and most certainly better than some of the stuff I've seen. Though towards the chapter 69 mark, I felt like the interactions with MC and the FMC were rather strange. There was a certain "love is in the air" vibe going on during the build-up, and then all of a sudden it wasn't there anymore. It appears and then disappears randomly, it's nonexistent unless both characters are having an interaction in the story and that's a little off-putting.As a whole, I think this novel is rather well written compared to some of the originals on this website. It's clear that a lot of time and effort was put into it and it shows. I especially like the fact that the mc isn't "extraordinarily handsome" and that the FMC doesn't have paragraphs upon paragraphs describing her as some unearthly beauty in some weird chinese mystical syntax with meaning that is completely lost in translation.
Good story but mc is a complete idiot. Dies, goes back in time with knowledge to prevent a horrible future. Does very little to stop it. Has amazing powers but uses them like a tool. Has soooo many chances to fix the future but like an idiot, only does the bare minimum to save his own family. But does a horrible job at it
love the concept of this!!! just some little discrepancies here and there...but overall it's lovely....getting sick and tired of "system this and that" novels everywhere.. they've gotten quite bland....so.....more updates!!!!