Origin of the Wolf Spider (Spider man fanfiction)

Author don't worry about the language barrier experienced readers can tell the difference between a bad writer and a language barrier so don't worry about that. it was a good story but I gave it 4 stars just because I was not a big fan of the female lead other then that it was really good

1522chapters and the story is not even completed? Sorry but this is too long. It only proves this, you are not a good writer who can wrap up a story in a reasonable amount of chapters. That story must be dragging on and on, beating around the bushes, repeating etc... I won't read this, too long!!

Sparky was brought towards the ward for some minor treatments for his wounds. There, he met Mae who was watching Veronica doing her work in a curious face. Mae turned and noticed Sparky who was entering the ward. "Sparky! A-Are you ok..?" questioned Mae in a worried manner as she grabbed Sparky's arm and looked as his wounds.