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5 stars because I got hooked on the first chapter. And I LOVE mysterious books.
Early stage of the novel but seems interesting. Almost the same vibes as other OP MC works but unique in its own way. Keep up !!?
Very nice, please continue working. I hope it does not stop and does not deviate from the course of the story. I hope it does not involve women too much.
When did you start writing again, you should have told me. Anyways I'll leave this at 5 stars until I read it then I'll send through another review.
This is too stupid!!! Mc has 2 systems and one of them is given by gods called Heavenly system(HS)...and guess what, its's down right terrible!!! Mc is forced to become a villain and if he treats any one positively, even his family in the starting(even though only once), he gets tortured by HS...his memory is sealed by HS and has no free will...he is a literal dog on a leash and if he tries to create a positive image, you know what happens...the bastard author's so called created gods force frame mc to be evil in front of everyone and still sacrifice himself for them in the end...Why not make him a puppet???He is literally a pseudo puppet already...Gods don't force someone to be evil you brain dead author, if thats the case then humans would not have inherent cruelty in them, all you have to do is fan the flames and watch the world burn, hell just give them a little power with no backlash and thats it for fucks sake...you want mc to gain our sympathy but you should better find friends dude, you are wasting your life there by leeching off sympathy from newbie readers.
Peak, peak, peak, peak, peak, peak, peak, absolute cinema, no words, peak peak. Peak peak peak, peak peak. peakpeakpeakpeakpeak.In all honestly, for my friend's first work, and as someone who hasnt read a lot of webnovel in the first place, this has a good start. I am investing with this high rating
The beginning starts off rough, but after a while the story gets very good. The Character design is probably the best part, the story is interesting. Highly recommend the author re-write the first few chapters, this story has high potential!
Never!
" Hey , I'm not the one who said that we must put rules and the bet first before we start though . So Put up with your leader rules."
"Flint, I will teach what you've asked and the training for your body will be ready in the next few days once I get to understand how you're built. So for those next few days, we will be running around the town together. This way I will know how your muscles work and where your stamina is at. The marathon will continue until you keel over."
"Oh, come on. I even thought of pouring hot coffee on you and having her dress your burns but it would have been too much for my sis-in-law.... Plus I couldn't bring myself to hurt you...." She says exasperatedly.