Fallacy here, ignore the shameless 5 five star.I just want to write to make this a good novel and let my readers enjoy.But for those people that want a romance so desperately, I may not be able to provide in the early chapters. I also want to write a romance but from my past novels rushing it never once worked for me, I want to write an overpowered MC who kills a lot of people he doesn't like alright? So if I were to rush the romance and introduce a two-dimensional heroine no one will like that so please understand. I want to write romance as fast as possible but I also want to flesh out the MC (although I suck at doing so.)P.S. I like reading comments and reviews alike, whether it be trash talk or praise I always read all the responses that I get, especially the ones that point my mistakes that let me improve.This is a long rambling review.
What makes this a huge red flag to me, is that within the first few chapters, not once is a "Sword" mentioned, or his ability with it. The only thing the story eludes to is his unmatched potential at "cultivating" and the new super awesome cool technique for it that he recieves.. Makes me think this story will be more about his "power" and not his "skill" which either have already been done, cliched and shoved down our throats countless times, but when it comes to those types of stories which I will only read out of sheer boredom and nothing else to do..at least the ones based around "skill" are more thought out. MC advancing down the dao of the sword etc..or understanding laws behind it. Not some lame cultivation technique.
Added to liblary. Will read this after, well at least 10 chapter.Interesting idea indeed.How about you pick name from grunt marines at ww1-2, not the war hero, but those who get a hard earned medal.War hero sometimes just a propaganda. But many real hero, only got the lowest sometimes got none, be it medal or respect they deserve.
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It's the same kind of story than "Ocean survival" but i find it better for the moment. The mc is OP but not to OP like ocean survival.
I have read this story in one go today and it was fantastic love the story and especially the attitude of the protagonist. Definitely give it a try!
Breathtaking!! Nothing short of Breathtaking! This unique story is an awesome work of art. It envelopes the harsh reality of a war while underlying the fleeting beauty of living with such burdensome responsibility. The characters, the writing style, the description, the world-building and even the instances playing out— everything is so top notch! From grinning widely to sobbing subty. This book takes you on a roller coaster ride of emotions. It makes me want to re-read the book again and again. Overall, I highly recommend it to everyone! Ps. Don't forget to grab a whole bunch of tissues!!
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It's good and all, especially the early chapters but once you hit when he returns it's just so bad, like it's fine but I just hate how they make the whole love interest thing. I don't get why he needs this love interest so much. Can't the man just be alone bruh. Like I get that you want to add a female lead and all but you don't got to, that was the appeal of this whole novel to me. Is that this crazy dude goes on a eternal rampage unable to connect to the world due to being well a walking disaster. Anyways I've dropped it for now at least, might pick it up again and if I do I might change my review but I'm just leaving it like this.
The authors previous works were completed so he never drops stories, the grammar is good, and all i can for this novel is that I hope it doesnt get drop