Interesting story with good world building, let's hope it continues like this.
The writing quality is smooth and engaging, it's a very good read! The author updates enough to keep things moving, and the story's development is perfectly paced and sensical. Character design...I want to see more and more of Sia, I hope there's a lot a lot of chapters to come. Sia is like an accidental but still somehow kickbutt hero. It's an interesting way to have a character, and the author pulls it off flawlessly. I'd give Character Design 10 stars if I could. World Background is good too, I gave it 4 out of 5 because I know there's still more development to be done. It's a really good read overall, if you're looking for a story like suede, this is the one.
As a previous reader of Author's previous work, Cultivation Through Artifacts, I must say his writing became better which can be noticed the very start!Keep up the good work!
Hello, this is my first book and I am getting better with each chapter. Either way, just because I wrote it does not mean I will not judge it fairly. I do think I could do better on telling more visual details, and yes I know it is focused a lot on the system for now however that is just so you can see his growth, that will be brought down a lot eventually. Other than describing visuals, I think I am doing pretty well. If you think I am wrong please leave comments or something on how I can do better. I look forward to hearing from you.
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I honestly think this is really good. The writing isn’t amazing but I like the storyline. I hope that the writer is consistent with the uploads and I believe that this could become a really great story
Good Novel. Please continue, author-san.
*This review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism:There are a few mistakes (punctuation and capitalization) that need corrected. Also, I wish we saw a bit more of his wife (mabey in later chaps?)Positive Notes:I really liked the character and story buildup. Also, the way you did the whole reincarnation tech, just amazing. Thank you for the great story.Personal Preference:I h8 that I needed to limit myself to five chapters for now, too many books to go through to read any more. Will definitely come back to this one later, be expecting my return and please keep writing until completion.;,;. (If you don't, you will have many upset fans.;,;.)
Oh another refreshing isekai story.Now review time...Writing quality: The narratives are easy to read. There are few minimal grammatical errors but it doesn't much hinder your reading. The dialogues too are clear. Stability of updates: Great, and seeing that this is already reach 40 plus nicely done.Story Development: It has a generic isekai trope but the author made it somewhat unique in their own way.Character Design: The Mc has his own distinct personality which could remembered by the readers. Other characters has their own personas which you could enjoy.World Background: It is written well and detailed.Overall this book is a interesting read. If you are a fan of isekai stories then this one is greatly recommended.Great Work Author!
Love the Doulou Dalu series. I've found this one more enjoyable than Legend of the Dragon King so far. Looking forward to seeing how the story develops in the future!
I never thought that it would be translated again after being droped the first time. I relly loved its unique plot and i found the relationship between charachters to be intresting and lifelike.
The story is good, although there may be some grammar mistakes, the story progression is good and the story is thrilling. Overall a good book.