I’v read the free chapters up till now and I got to say it’s good for an anime but not really for a novel. But all in all it’ pretty good with all the scenes and how he gives the systems to his sisters.
It's good and all, especially the early chapters but once you hit when he returns it's just so bad, like it's fine but I just hate how they make the whole love interest thing. I don't get why he needs this love interest so much. Can't the man just be alone bruh. Like I get that you want to add a female lead and all but you don't got to, that was the appeal of this whole novel to me. Is that this crazy dude goes on a eternal rampage unable to connect to the world due to being well a walking disaster. Anyways I've dropped it for now at least, might pick it up again and if I do I might change my review but I'm just leaving it like this.
It's almost amazing how these authors can come up with interesting concepts, and then turn them into complete trash, especially by trying to use "comedy".The MC is worthless and has almost no agency, just getting carried along by every single other character. He had one decent idea, put a plan into motion, accomplished his goal, and then let all of that success be taken away by everyone around him because he's an idiot. Even that could be forgiven if at any point the story had elicited even a single half-hearted chuckle out of sheer pity, but it couldn't even manage that.It's almost painful to read this story with how bad everything is, with the single exception of the MC's sister who had potential to be a bright spot in this wasteland, but then was dragged into the same garbage sabotaging of the MC like everyone else.It's been a while since I've seen an MC so worthless that I wish they'd just drink a gallon of drain cleaner, but in this case it would actually help him, so of course it won't happen.
Tbvh at first the pacing didn’t get me, but as I kept reading I got hooked, really good write up, looking forward to reading more of these.?
Hello I am currently in chapter 258 so I started reading order of chaos to know backstory of arsene I just wanna know one thing please..Is lilith (yura) aurelia?? please author ans
omg there's only 16 chapters so far but Unholy-chan pulled me headfirst into a new world filled with fantasy, adventure and a healthy sprinkle of t+a (;really hoping this story continues to be as incredible as it is at the start and i shall be adding this novel to my "F5 Sect" list ^^i'm really looking forward to seeing Allen level up his love life with plenty of wild play while exploring uncharted territories of this new virtual reality world with his wives xDi also badly want to see character growth both in vr and the real world. this type of genre is def one of my favorites!
The concept is very interesting. I liked both the characters and plot. I am looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author ?
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Muy buena novela (Es decir mejor que la basura y mucho peor que cualquier libro decente) , con un comienzo increíblemente lento por lo cual dudo que sea elegida.Es una novela de juegos de supervivencia , el protagonista que recuerde no es muy interesante , pero los juegos están interesantes.
Very good..... Nice writings...All the Best karthikeya...Hope u succeed in ur life for sure....By ur sister....................Good luck....Achieve more n more in ur lyff...U should get more n more Victoriess...
I thought I had already written a review but welp, but nope.One of the best romance novels on this website with a ML (kinda). Usually it's Harem sh*t and girls throwing themselves at MC and cringy as hell. This is a very nice novel with nice story. I hope you guys enjoy this as much as I did!
hey ,your story is really n1 to read i found it a few days before.I dont can tell the end direction of your story @ the moment but the setting ist really n1 .I like it because it´s not like this "Normal Gameing Novel" like Legendary Guardian or so.Hope that you can bring more Updates to your novel that i can see your creator Path.mfg Kamu