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This is the first cultivation novel i read that is not generic, cliché, and repetitive. I love this novel. Hope the author can continue with it. ufffcufffcufffc
Don't get baited by the old mc premise. I could only read 4 chapters of this. So much random plot armor. Might be a decent read if you are looking for a no brain required power fantasy novel with a blacksmith who will probably turn into a warrior anyway lol. Good thing is that it does not try to hide and you can easily understand what type of story is so u won't waste to much time if it's not your thing.
Good story, but translation quality needs improvement.
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I'm sure if I just missed it but there's no going into the game or anything.. I found the writing close together and tbh I got confused really fast. Some words like evident are overused, like in the very first paragraph of the first chapter. The characters are very unique and development is ok. I recommend hiring an editor because I see a lot of well.. grammar errors, etc. Keep writing though, your creative expression is a very healthy habit!
Started binge reading this on Gravity Tales when I saw it in the running here when it suddenly got removed TT u TT.No worries though! Bingeing it was so easy because it's such a fun read! The cast of characters are funny and easy to distinguish from each other. The MC is an oblivious idiot sometimes yet still not a doormat, his expertise just lie elsewhere.
OH MY GOD THANKS FOR UPDATING !!! IT WAS AWESOME IM REALLY THANKFULL !! PLZ UPDATE AGAIN!! CAN U MAKE HIM FIND SOMETHING OP AND GETS A HAREM??
Honestly I was reall liking the book for the first 12 chapters but after that the story became really rushed and opened up a lot of plot holes in the story. It is really sad to see that happen to a novel that intrigued me.
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Oh look, another one of those novels. Crippled youth gets picked on and called trash, finds a universe-shaking treasure in his backyard in an obvious location that for some reason isnt found by any other of the (much more talented) millions of other cultivators out there. May or may not include a spirit master, skill books or scrolls that teach him ancient arts that gradually make him unrivalled, supposedly... Yet always seems to get his ass handed to him by power creep baddies. Worry not, he eventually trounces them, only to get trounced by their uncles, then their grandpas, then their ancient ancestors, then their supreme all-father. in short, another ****ty xianxia novel.