This novel starts very well. The plot is interesting and the MC is sa real robber. But after the novel begin to be like... big ****.... *sigh* this numbers are just... too much... I know that they can live a long time and get a lot of time to copulate... But please respect urself and the others... I hope Wu Qi will not fall in this kind of depravaty.... I'm quite sad because I really love this story. The beginning was really good and now the story still lacking a bit. Don't forget the MC is a thief, but he didn't enjoy the troubled times of the war to steal something? Even if he is a commander... The only things he gets it's fish-scales and he even didn't rob them... Irecommend this novel only for the beginning I'm hoping that this novel will gets good change by the time...
WELL IM WRITING A COMMENT TO THE AUTHOR ,
This was one of the first web novels i had read , each chapter kept me hooked , the depth of the feelings each character of the story spoke to me , i was heart broken to find out that this book was discontinued, may be if i read this again it may not be as good as i remembered it five years ago . but i truly hoped and wished then that you would continue the story where he leaves and starts schooling in the empire. I wanted to see how would he actually coax his fiance about his maids and their reaction.
If you ever read this and have a change of heart please continue where you have left off , even if no one else reads it , I WILL.
i don't know if you have just lost interest in writing or facing difficulties because of which you quit , then i understand .
No mater how many novels there are out there , each one of them is unique, even yours , or if you cant find more recipes to incorporate into the story ,i will still love this novel .
A five year late thank you note
Horrible, story is very slow, the protagonist was strong at first, got weak and then strong, I do not understand anything.
This last bow is very boring and boring, he could defeat everyone with a thought, but he stares through a mirror, out of which he is very idiotic and ungrateful.
I do not recommend, the previous version was ten times better.
Very good story. First novel make me want to rate it
The protagonist is my most favourite so far
This novel deserve more recognize
Hi. I'm the author of this story. You can call me Adivonna. I'm an amateur writer. I'm an absolute fan of stories with villainess main characters so I decided to write my own. I hope you enjoy the story.
Btw, I pettily gave myself a 5 star rating. He-he'
The story is good but some things are getting annoying.The mc sometimes forget information he already knows, especially about the composition of this world ( different continents with different power bases ).I am at chapter 125 and he was suprised at least 4 time about the same information. That there is a magic continent. Even after the dragon confirmed his suspicion. He still got suprised by the dungeons information and also after hearing magic continent from tian tian after becoming a dungeon town owner. The main char is stupid and i sometimes think that the author himself forgets information he already revealed to the MC.As an author, he should be able to follow his own story but i am happy that he never mixed names so fat
I liked the story so much I went to patreon and am now in book 2. Awesome work!
Hello folks. Time for more Horror, i suppose? Now that House of Horrors is ending, Qidian has offered me to pick up this project. However, with the epidemic looming (incidentally also the theme of this book), there won't be much pay.
Translation has always been a hobby of mine and granted, i hope it will continue to pay but hard times i suppose.
Well, enough about the doom and gloom, although you'll get plenty in this story either way XD
In any case, long story short, this story will be picked up and do join us on Discord if you feel like following the story with other readers: https://discord.gg/8fgRmg2
And if you are feeling generous, small donations to a fan translator will be much appreciated: https://ko-fi.com/lonelytree
I enjoy reading it.. The mc is slowly evolve from weak to powerfull.. But the enemy is always way to stronger than him..
I hope that this novel will get picked
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the way to hook readers to the story!
starts with the bitter past of rose makes me sympathetic towards her.
I like how the storyline is created and chapters are linked to each other
next thing I know I was at the 4th chapter.
all in all great work author. keep it up
I'm rather syrprised considering that Martial God Space was left unfinished both in the raws and the translated version. After, I read this novel, I will change the stars for the review if necessary. I just hope that this novel isn't dropped.