1. the translation is **** 2. the mc has no brain cells 3. the mc is a pedo4. the mc is sexsist 5. and it doesn't get any betterwsfsfsfsfsfsf
Good story, good plot, some inconsistencies, ruined because you thought everyone would understand why you do and progress the plot like that (reason and lore) but they skim read
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A novel with a good but unfortunately wasted premise. -There is too much silly drama, almost everything is taken out of proportion. Whether the it is for romance or action, the spontaneous events happening around mc are not realistic. eg: Mc could be going to the shop only to find random enemies, girlfriend is attacked even though they should be completely alone. -No set up for the change of tone in the story, eg:quickly shifting from action to romance to dark. The events in the novel don't feel connected and is jarring. -Themes being added without any build up. The novel will shift from lighthearted to dark without any build up, catching those not interested in the dark themes unaware. -Whenever mc tries to say something wise, I can't help but think its pretentious eg:reminds me of my experience with naruto spouting platitudes. The feeling i get from the novel is like someone trying to explain something they don't understand. The novel would be better in my opinion... if it focused on a few themes from the beginning and had gradual development of the various events. Still worth reading but there isn't much to immerse in, only good for a casual read.
it's good until chapter 190, after that they change the protagonist to that old cliche random saves and kill the young master.......................
chapter 25 ends with him wanting to follow the prisoner he helps to find out more of the truth, but chapter 26 suddenly change into him joining a variety show to show off his escape skill. And no, there are no skipped chapter, the author just suddenly went from serious arc to bragging arc for no reason.
Quite an in entertaining read hahaha the poor dude gave birth to his grandmother very amused ? this daoist is very very amused hahahahaha shall our mc might as well become a demon king right away for facing such a tribulation his manhood had been desiccated on oh my hohoho no actually a demon God? this doaist is very humored indeed ?
Ok I love the design of your character I also like the development but this is actually just my opinion but I think that some parts are rushed and some parts are kinda missing some details but overall it's a wonderful story
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This story, is terrible. He learned martial arts while he’s American, so hilarious. “How do we know he’s American?” He’s talking English dumb ****. If it was karate I’d honestly praise the novel. It would change something without flaunting it. Oh and the system, “Is the system sentient or something?” Yes actually, it’s called AI. And he would know as he is a novel fanatic as the novel says. Fucking Christ, this story is boring uncreative lazy has bad grammar. A **** ton more but phones are annoying to type on. It might as well put a name and then the text, as it already says he says or she says for literally everything. Bad story, and that’s the end of the story.
I'm sorry I personally like this story. This is just my opinion and I know a lot of people are tired of novels like these but I'm a sucker for system novels. I may have trash taste and I like almost anything but hey, it's just my opinion. I like how the sect can upgrade itself but it's too random and just happened whenever the MC needs it. There hasn't been enough chapters for me to judge character development correctly. We have no background story for when he was on earth but that happens with a lot of novels. Nothing would change if the MC was a native. There feels like no challenges are present and the MC can just steamroll his way to victory by a landslide with no difficulties at all.MC doesn't act like a real person if he was actually transmigrated into a xianxia world and adapted quickly but hey, it's a xianxia novel. Anyways, that's about it. I love trash.
Well, the main character gets cucked, which the author didn’t even bother to warn about, which is quite the annoying thing thung to deal with when you expect a decent novel