JanisJeplin
This novel has so much potential, an older mc is not something you usually see on here! Can't wait, hope the stability of updates is good..............
I read 30 chapters! The novel is interesting! Not easy! The character lives in two worlds! Dialogues are well written in the story! The world is described fascinatingly, creatively! The character of the character, I still do not understand until the end, but here you just need to read on! There is humor in the novel, there are also some deeper thoughts!I want to wish the author to be more attentive to details, if in doubt, specify, check. But this does not affect the general text block of the novel, it is really interesting, fascinating and intriguing!As an author, I could learn from this novel how to compose such interesting and lively dialogues! Bravo, author, thank you for such an interesting story!No wonder I included it in my library! I will read it slowly! Thanks for the wonderful written story!With admiration
Just a great book I have never read a parody of tropes in such a manner honestly I never thought it would be this great when I started but it's just awesome I cannot explain how much I enjoy this
I think the author got his martial artist idea from Swallowed Star, as I am getting the same vibe from this novel, but on entirely different level.
A good start to a great novel. Keep up the good work.....................................................................................................................
I like the review and the comment. Just getting started..... I believe it going to be a great novel couple with the cultivation stuff.???
The amazing story of a mischievous teenager dealing with the corrupted world. You may need to change the description to fit the Superstar/CIA/Laws aspect of the novel, it's not really inspiring right nowSo far i'm loving it, Keep going !
Hello all. I have been a vivid reader of webnovels for a long time. After reading so many fantasy novels, I always wanted to write one of my own. So this is my first try. I know the chapters are small. Trust me they felt longer when I initially wrote them. I will work on the length. Looking for honest reviews.
OMG TYTYTY holy I never thought this would get picked up so quickly and it's like 14 ch/wk my prayers have been answered, the great famine is over (and to those who say that the TL is worse than an MTL, any MTL reader can tell that you're lying. You will actually develop aneurysms and brain tumors from the MTL, and I haven't gotten any yet). Well, on to the actual review- This book is amazing; however, the MC isn't (too) OP. He has a good head on his shoulders, and that's about it. He uses this head of his to slowly evolve his city and T-rekt all the enemies that stand before him. It has the whole package of twists and turns, and one of my top 3 novels overall.
Dropped. The author went from daily updates to not updating in a month, without even giving the novel a "Taking a break" status. Based on the criteria for stars, this is a 2.6, but personally, this is a one.
The first chapters of the book are quite cringeworthy but if you can endure the cringe, you will find a wonderful and complex world. NPCs are multi-dimensional beings and the characters are loveable, though I suggest not being attached to them hahaha :'( If the author can move us like this early i wonder how will the novel be in the future.
I have followed this work since it first came out. And to this day I have not been disappointed. MC plans well, but is far from omnipotent. The pace of the story doesn't feel rushed at all. I'm glad author goes back and revises all the small spelling and grammar issues I point out. The only thing I'm sad about is the fact that I'm too poor to buy coins and have to wait for updates. ? If nothing else, keep on author!
