Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engages I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
i read up to vol2. the story and pace is good . the world building is somewhat lacking . well , have to read more up and coming chapters.
I really enjoyed reading these chapters, I can’t wait to see what happens next. So far so good.? ? I love it so much.❤️ ? ? ? ? now I'm addicted, can't stop reading it. Reading is my favorite thing to do.....
It has a good potential! But author needs to arrange it well and there are some words that needs spacing.
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I came across this on accident, but seems like a good thing. Seems like this could shape up to exciting. Only two pages so far, but I hope they share more of their unique world they are giving us.
I am so disappointed. This is so good novel yet no one bothers to read it, appreciate it. So less views.....The novel here is kinda new for me though i have read hundreds of novels... it is refreshing, realistic but kinda dark. So much happens to a 7 year old kid. His father abandons him while escaping enemies thinking since he is a child they wont kill him as he would have an advantage as a hostage, also he doesnt know any secrets. He gets betrayed by his caretaker who is a spy. He gets roughed up every now and then, badly brutally beaten up, life on the edge..... never has happy moments... used by others like a pawn... All this happening to him when he is only 7 yrs old, currently 10 yrs.....Writing quality is good, very less errors. story development is awesome but kinda dark and realistic, updates are a little irregular.... MC is a kid, a runt, betrayed, wants to prove himself.... his personality is acceptable coz he was sheltered kid for 6 yrs and then suddenly all the ugliness is thrown to him though he acts too tough for a kid....Other characters are also realistic with each having own sad back story. Not much is known about world background but from what i read looks like it will be epic and i guess it will war on god level if this book continues.I hope people appreciate this work coz it really is very good. Hope author keeps writing more frequently and regularly
Woah! I was skeptical since I often read female leads more often, but this isn't that bad at all! The plot was interesting and detailed. The characters are well thought out. Despite not having been as interested from the synopsis, I'm rather hooked onto it!
Always a refreshingly fine tuned translator and awesome content...always a pleasure to read...rebirth novel at its finest i must say!! Highly recommend this novel to anyone new to webnovel looking for a nice read!!
Amazing. This is a detailed setting full of death, grim, and suffering. It does not hesitate in being graphical or harsh. Set in a South America controlled by Cartels, this work offers what you love about Latin American contexts and stories. The main character feels highly rounded, and although he is literally nicknamed The Grim Reaper in Spanish, he is not a psycho, blood-thirsty machine without reason nor will. The leader of the Guerreros is a highly charismatic character that always leaves you wanting more of him. Highly recommended work. The grammar is flawless, the flow is consistent, and the scenery and action scenes are very well described. This goes to my library.
Love this story. Is innocent and very loving. Great job. I hope to get more frequent updates. In real life you get many couples as the main Fl and ML.
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