Sophia Lopez is a nerdy girl going through university that resurrects in a fantasy world. Gathering information and power is the key to return to her world and deliver her final essay in time.
Kylie/ Kyle is reincarnated.. Supersmart, super talented super caring. But not super. I feel that her/his character needs more maturity. Yes his 13 but he has 40 years experience and while in the shadows his strong. I would like an earlier pay out. His life seems controlled or mapped. Fetered. Great yet sad. I can understand why the fab five have insecurities but not her/him. Her children. She projects her children onto Kayla. Kayla has to be growing in annoyance with it as she is a teenager. Morso her jealousy of him being a boy and conservatively being treated better.Some characters motivations can be better thought out and explained i.e. mrs dobbins..An enjoyable read but there is room for improvement. Keep it up. Not that I can critique .... 5 star for the fact its free.. but actuall rating would be a 4.4-4.6
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