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Not the best novel I read but it’s a lot better than most of novels here on webnovel...Also I hope this novel get picked and that the author continues with this novels and doesn’t stop like with most of the picked novels on trial reads…
I like the ability so far and the story has great potential. I hope you don’t drop this author and keep up the work.
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I might prefer romance novel but I enjoyed this novel really much. My review might be too late but I hope this novel will get a secound chance because it‘s a interesting story and the female main character (the witch) is one of the character I want to know how they will act in the future.
I read up until almost 10 chapters and I can only tell you guys to read it!! It's so fun! I usually don't read cultivation novels but this one is like an all-in-one. You get to see the author's awesome humor, great plot and world design. So let's take it from the top, Writing Quality : I absolutely enjoy how the text is easy to understand. Every line is carefully written and intrigues me to read more. I didn't notice any errors either.Updates : Updates are great so far. Story Development : The story is great. It shows the problems MC has to face but I like how the MC is witty and playful and gets over his problems, like not being able to cultivate but solving it though.... harnessing xD. Character Design : The MC is funny, quick-witted, not stupid at all and fit for the cultivation set-up. I like his overall personality. Also his kid version is soooo cute. The side characters are so sassy though. Always there to balance things out with the quick-witted MC. Specially the loli girl. World Background : Not complicated to understand. I think the author explained each part in detail. It compliments the story. I really liked the academy setting. Conclusion : If you haven't read this yet then you're missing out.
author can you give a link of discord? ....................................................................................................................
Never seen a book die so fast. I think they released 14 chapters after being picked, and poof disappeared like magic. Also hate when you see there are more chapters but they are locked with no updates sweet.
A copy of Astral pet but atleast wih this story there is pet selling. That being said... i feel like the shop isnt the actual main focus but instead just a crux for the mc to get stronger. I did not get the feel of it being an actual story about a shop owner like lets say pet king. The shop is just a thing to improve the mc. So my score is on the rather low side because of it. Quality and updates are good, story is bad and character is as well. World sounds awesome tho.For those reading the review, do give it a try to see if you do like it. (specially if you like astral... which i did not)
Ill start with this , EACH CHAPTER , IS A CLIFF HANGER , the author does not literally have any other weapon in his arsenal , this novel wouldmake you puke blood . I read about 10+ Novels on Webnovel.com , this is by far my worst pick .Read 147 Chapters , there has been almost 4 arcs at this point .First Arc was the longest , almost spanning to 80+ Chapters , after that 3 Arcs , of Rinse and repeat . Am not even kidding you , his fiance gets taken away , he works hard to go after her, gets **** on by others , reaches destination gets forced to fight people literally 1 Realm higher than him . Imagine Houtian Level 1 forced to Fight Xiantian Level 5 , Plot Armor pulls him through. AND THIS HAPPENED 3 TIMES IN A ROW , withing 50 chapters .and again , EACH CHAPTER , IS A CLIFF HANGER , that is the worst part of it all.