loved the story till now...hope you post more chapters?❤️❤️
very hard to read conversations aren't like how people would actually talk character choices are practically random with little to no thought the idea behind the story is interesting but not enough for me to power through the mind numbing conversations and weird statements
?Don't dare stop writing.I need two chaps per day
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Wonderful read, Love the detail and the way its such an easy story to read. Cant wait to continue reading xx
Never reviewed before but there were just some glaring issues. It’s an interesting story with potential and a fun read, but the amount of plot holes is jarring. Many times in the story the author talks about powerful beings not being able to interfere in the games, yet the games and specifically Elliot get interfered with constantly from outside sources and nothing is done about it by the games commission. While the power system and beast taming aspects are pretty cool, the author just rushes through some parts of the story and does not fully think about how certain events affect the story. The constant interference was just the main issue I had with the story, there are others but they are much less impactful. The story’s got potential, and if the author can fix some of these issues they may have a real gem in this story.
TO AUTHOR: Updated synopsisThis is a complete and total correction to the synopsis. Didn't want you to miss it since I replied in a comment previously.Please read carefully, I fixed it while trying to keep your original words as much as possible. The synopsis is a bit long and it looks too much like an essay, I'm really not sure what the attention span of readers on this site is but it's best to space things out so they don't feel overwhelmed.I'm sure you know or have seen people who encounter a block of text and immediately skim it or don't read it. I'm not sure if the comment keeps formatting but take a look at most other synopsis on the site, They follow either of the two: 1) Short synopsis in which case it's okay to be a paragraph 2) Longer synopsis in which case everything is broken apart and spaced out so it seems much more friendly.Again, I tried to preserve your original words and intentions as best as possible but let me know if you want thoughts on changing something. I don't mind helping with this bit since it isn't too time consuming. If the comment doesn't have spacing, try not to keep the multiple sentence paragraphs like you're writing an essay. You want it to look friendly, not intimidating to people who are impatient and judge by first impression.I wanted to tell you to check out "Pro Writing Aid". Grammarly is for grammar and punctuation. ProWritingAid is basically it's big brother that covers everything else, as long as you're not horribly misspelling words this should really help you out. I used to use it in college and still use it on rare occasions. There should be a trial you can try out as well, it doesn't even hurt to get your readers opinions while trialing it and see how they feel if you want that route. My corrections below, you'll have to figure out the formatting Everyone loves the protagonist, and it’s difficult not to since they’re the centerpiece of the story, nothing seems to move if they don’t. You’re happy when they achieve great things and sad, maybe even disappointed when they lose or fail. How many people fall in love with a novel and wish they could live in that world? What happens if their wish comes true? There’s a reason people say “Be careful what you wish for, you might get it”. Is reincarnation as easy as it sounds? Sure, if you don’t mind being a nobody. Can someone who was just a normal person change the world they were reincarnated in? Not just to survive but thrive? Can they magically be accustomed to great pain and hardship or does it actually take willpower. This is the story of a boy who died only to reincarnate into a novel he had read, Dawn of Legends. Unlike other stories, he reincarnated into an extra who is just cannon fodder; someone who’s only purpose is to be used by the villains and protagonists to achieve their goals. Someone you could forget, whose life means nothing to the plot. At first, he was in despair, shocked and confused about what to do, racking his mind figuring out how to survive this harsh world. He was in a pinch whether to stay low-key or use his future knowledge to get stronger while befriending the protagonist. But will everything go according to plan? Will future events follow the same route in the novel with him influencing the world?Can he overcome all the crises that are bound to happen in the future? Does the world have other plans for him?Is his reincarnation just a coincidence or are there other forces at play? This is the tale of an ordinary boy, not a once in a millennium, martial artist or genius, billionaire who adapt from the very first day and establish their dominance; this is the tale of a boy who rises and climbs higher, step by step.Accompany Lucas on his journey, armed with future knowledge and a system as he traverses obstacles in his path, fighting against a world unlike what he knew before, and to find out the mystery behind his reincarnation.
The book and the story itself is just great! I know I've said it before but it's really a good book/story! I love how different they are to each other and you can easily distinguish the likes of it. Keep it up! Lovelots, Cie??❤❤
A great novel, very happy to see it back in translation.The MC is very good, clever and not rash.The universe is interesting, and not as absurd as the one in some other xianxia, so it's a very good read.
Hey, Translator? Are you going to continue to post chapters on WebNovel? Or is there somewhere else that you will post chapters?