Love the story very much! Great and neat translation! Correct and clear words and usage! Grammatically correct and easy to understand! Overall, a great work!!
The story is fine, has a bit of a dark vibe, but nothing too emo. 50 to 70 percent of each mini chapter is a massive stats spam.Its causing me to dislike the story a lot. There's no point reading this if you don't binge read it from start to finish. The chapters are too small to be interesting or memorable by themselves, so you won't remember what the story was like with a new update, the chapters are just too short to allow for such reorientation.So whilst the story is interesting on the whole, I dont recommend reading it untill it's fully released or changes the chapter sizes to not primarily reach a word count through an often times irrelevant and unchanged stats spam.I honestly recommend the author to post like 1500 words at a min., and up to to 2500 words per chapter minus stats.That's what the wn guidelines recommend for contests as well.
an interesting novel but it should be better to complete it.
Someone face slapping their own system with it not being a cold machine or being able to force their hand? I'll read this purely to see that! (Putting all 4s till I read and remember to change or decide too)
Underrated!!This is pretty good read if you can endure until arc 3 when mc go to the capital that's where the it get me hookedThe only thing bothering me is the female **** who keeps stomping on the mc
It's a nice read. A great plot, smart MC, and unique world background. The MC is out to achieve a significant goal which is great to read. It also has a great romantic plot. Summary: It's worth reading.Thanks for sharing this with us Author-San.
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new translation is half baked Straight from the Google translate??. sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad
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Really cool world and a very interesting idea for science fiction! The quality of writing is higher than usual considering this is Webnovel, always a nice thing to see! Good story overall
is the story really completed like it says above? I read the last chapter above, and it doesn't feel completed, just says end of volume 1... Are other volumes going to be published as different books?
>crazy killing Supreme blessing>dragon city 1>great void taboo mastetIf you told me this was auto generated by an ai, I would belive you.It honestly baffles me how you can write this garbage, si wish fulfillment fanfics have higher protection value than this utter garbage.Congratulations, this garbage have finally convinced me to end it all. Good luck fellow readers. Not even God can save you now