Seriously amazing, just the synopsis got me hooked. The well-written chapters of a magical world within the earth. Though chapters are few, it is making me hooked as I read further.
Will update to a 5-star review if you fucking put brackets or something around the GODDAMNED SYSTEM TEXT.....................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This novel started off very good where the MC was part of a city where everyone got teleported to a new world and they had to survive altogether. The city ultimately got overrun but MC went back in time and received an ability to upgrade himself through contribution points from changing the future. But then, two major flaws appeared as the chapter count got higher.1) Instead of focusing on growing stronger, the author decided to go all investigation of this and that, causing the novel to move sideways. Writing filler arcs are fine, but it's not fine when it goes on for 50 chapters.2) The author keeps throwing wikipedia info dumps whenever he/she can. Like our MC would slice apart a bus to throw the metal at monsters. But before he actually throws, there would be a paragraph on how the bus was made and what type of materials were used. And this happens constantly and becomes annoying as the story progresses.Those two things completely lowered the quality of this novel but I still recommend a try.
at first, I liked the MC because he wants to Cultivate in peace but in the development of the story the MC looks like Coward and he wasted a lot of Opportunities to be stronger than he was but as I said he is a Coward
I was ok with this author until I read mated to the moon goddess ch 10 \\"I know but in case you aren't aware, I'm the reason why you look cute. Left for Hera, I'm sure she would have turned you to a black American.\\" She frowned.\\" As a black American I'm offended and will not support a write like this
please dear author Nate's story next....
I've been turning over the symbolism in this chapter and it's richer than I first thought. The cabbage stew is the first thing that comes to mind — it's mentioned repeatedly, almost comically, as the source of complaint. But it's also a perfect symbol for the entire household system. The household-born maids find it unappetizing because they've always had better. The purchased girls consider it a luxury because they've always had worse. The same food, two completely different realities. That's the theme the author is building: there is no universal experience in this world. Everything depends on where you stand in the hierarchy, and the hierarchy is designed to keep you there. Then there's the number four — the four girls the Old Matriarch will select. Four is a loaded number in Chinese culture, but here it works differently. It's not about superstition; it's about scarcity. Four spots for twenty-plus girls. The math itself is the theme. Meritocracy is the great lie of this household. The girls were taught that hard work and good behavior would earn them favor. But the conversation they overhear reveals the truth: the system was rigged from the start. Household-born girls have a leg up not because they're better, but because they're trusted. Outsiders are presumed dangerous. The Old Matriarch's plan to train four purchased girls as chamber maids is itself a kind of rebellion against the system — or is it? Maybe it's just a smarter version of the same cruelty. Select four, discard the rest, and call it merit. The symbolism here isn't heavy-handed; it's woven into everything — the food, the numbers, the geography, the gossip. Every detail carries weight.
Not something that I would usually read, but I found that it kept my interest peeked and I added it to my Library to continue reading.
loved the book.
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I loved the story
Very excellent