This book is awesome and the grammar etc is impeccable. I while heartedly recommended to anyone who enjoys a good system type novel. Serious props to the author. Take my stones. :)
well I must say this is a unique story, a dead hunting a living.but what I noticed emmy is that u write almost like I do when I describe a scene or an appearance.well everyone should give ur book a chance, even though u locked ur chapters early enough ???
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the protagonist having an English name is really annoying.....................................................................................
Everything is good and amazing, but there are a few issues that should be listed.1-The demon. He has unconditional mind control and memory viewing. This is just OP and should be revised. 2-The system. It is literally put down by a low ranked demon for no reason other than to slow development. 3- The teleportation. Every character and their mother has teleportation. This needs to be changed somehow. It serves no right that a low ranked demon adventurer can teleport, but the guard captain of a city lord cannot. 4-The world, no one has cellphones or even communication devices using magic, but they have advanced potions to translate literal gibberish to fluent language.
yo please keep writing this book I'm loving it yo the story is amazing and I love the characters so please just keep up the good work mate to everyone reading the ratings you gotta read this book
The beginning is pretty good,very well written novel. Has a great pacing,the complexity of the world background all are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss.Keep it up.
Es un fanfic pero los capítulos están bloqueados por webnovel ???????????????????????????????????????????????
my favourite completed novel on this site and second only to mother of learning . I read a lot so being my second favourite book is really impressive . the best part about this novel is the character growth and that everyone has a believable motivation. go read it you will not be disappointed .
Writing quality: Its terrible (1)Stability of Updates: Author seems to upload everyday so ok (5)Story development: Ye... just no (1)Character Design: average (3)World Background: Also average (2)score: 2.4Why does this have such high reviews?
The novel is just unique. The plotting and character development are quite good. The author is doing a great job. I strongly recommend this novel to everyone.
dum......so the whole premise is mc gonna be lazy & hidden.untill the end of story.... what are we gonna read... is about his disciples and wife... !!! lame.not my cup of tea ?