well, its a system novel so nothing much to expect. Translation is not bad, few errors here and there. no world building expect for a city and a few other places and character design, well like I said, this is a system novel so don't expect good character design. also, this is a very ***ist, like, wow.
Yeah, I mean...... Yes? No? This novel is really a fifty fifty. Kingdom building novel where the mc has the ability to teleport to one world to the other. Like the sypnosis said the mc will be given the city without having to pay tribute.So that means he is independant basically. So MC uses modern items to trade for money and uses that to build his own city for now.In the 40 chapters he already fought several wars, albeit lackluster explained it really shows mc's retardness. I mean, how the f*ck? This guy really thinks that if he equiped (only about 1 month?) trained soldiers with advanced weapons like crossbows and better quality swords and catapults he can defeat someone's seasoned soldiers with number advantage?Oh guess what? Of course he won! Like he got confidence defeating unorgansized bandits he think he can win against well trained armies? Just because he has better equipment? What, even his soldiers can adapt into modern formations? (In one month and even less).And there's no explanation how he even got his weapons from the modern world, no interaction with the modern world at all!Oh, forgot to say he's a huge f*cking hypocrite, or you could say the author is one cuz in this world there exist demi-humans. So mc accepts refugees and there are demi-humans mixed in with them. Well, he says he will give them equal rights but no, the demi-humans apparantly got less than normal humans. Wow, you change your damn mind faster than I beat my meat!Translation - 5* (Smooth like the hands in my freezer~)SoU - 5* (trial reads, always 5 stars)Story development - 3* (I don;t know how to explain this, read it yourself)Character design - 1* (Overconfident mc with retarded thinking)World background - 3* (demi-humans and medieval technology/era)Overall score 3.4
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Disagree with amaturewriter. If you wish and skill, you can think up and do a lot here. There is a fanfic of the strongest Quirkless and it is incredibly good, although gg has zenkai boost. I hope that the author will be able to correctly realize his idea. For the first chapters, so far everything is more orderly.
It's nice and fascinating so far. Even the title of your novel is quite attractive, I loved reading it. It's a nice novel, and I recommend it to everyone.There are some typos and grammatical mistakes but, I pointed out where ever I felt like to point. All over I loved reading it. looking forward to the next chapter.All the best for upcoming chapters.
this is a nice book for me and I hope for more chaptersAnd also try give us clear stages for your book's cultivation systemI hope it's selectednice work so farthanks.
One of the best sport novels but it needs more time for the story to get to its best part (3th year middle school and high school). Hope to continue the good work.
История хорошая спасибо!!!было бы более здорово если обновление было бы часто. Я только сегодня начал читать если обновления часто или недавно загрузили свою работу то тогда извините и все!!!!.