The story and world building is good and the updating is regular, the writing quality is amazing and the character design is good and the plot is interesting
Okay, let's see, I read through it and caught up quite quickly since the chapters weren't too long. The story doesn't have a 5/5 rating from me since I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes and typos, not any usage of unique words, even though she was explaining from the Author's Narrative, also using the word "Mum" seemed a bit too unprofessional. Though, the story was pretty fast-paced which is what readers like, Just the two first chaps alone moved like from 1 to 50. Like in the first chapter she got an order to save someone who's been kidnapped and boom step-sister in the next chapter. Overall it was a good read, I recommend reading it!!
Don't read this novel, let alone read the unlocked chapters..Because you will definitely regret it, because MC is 1000% slave of the system. Your brain will be damaged reading this ?????????
outstanding novel and very interesting to read
SilverQuill is my favorite writer at this point, I've finished his achievement junkie, I'm almost through Divine Beast Ascension, and I'm over 130 chapters into this here Fallen Conquerer! I just can't read anything else at this point because he is just so much better than anyone else I've found on the platform.characters are in depth and feel real with real struggles, relatable, and the story progresses at an actual realistic and desirable pace. just fast enough to keep you in suspense without drowning you in progress.I would 100% recommend giving Fallen Conqueror a read through and hop in Quill's Discord to be able to even talk with the man jimswlf about what you might want to see.
I'll be real, the story premise is really good. The only problems are constant change of POV, OOP flashbacks and redundant POV. If I describe this novel, it's like holding a bunch of strings with varying lengths with POV attached to the end and dragged onwards to create a story...
overall a good start some places story seems rushed
This Novel's much better than I thought, I don't know why this has such low views while the other books with lower standard have such high views.I want this to get chosen by Webnovel.
nice story Very informative and entertaining
The writing style of the novel captured my attention the most, and although the plotline was not exactly my cup of tea, there might be others who will be liking it, so I would not be judging on that! Any way, keep up with the good work!
This novel is good .
Doesn’t look like the Tang Sect ? there’s not even any rings. ??The F is for Fun