if someone told me this was a spinoff of legendary mechanic I would've believed it. But at the end of the day it doesn't matter as long as it's good so give it a read and if you guys want more of this type of novel just read legendary mechanic.
I put this rating because this main character is too stupid. Everything is fine when he grows over time in the game, in training. He may be wrong there, but not in a real situation. Namely, when concluding a contract with a company (chapter 164-165).He is too shocked, has not enough information, has not hired a lawyer, has agreed to a small salary. It made me write this review. It's not 1 star because I don't want to write another one with 5 stars. After all, the author has created an amazing work and this is a fact. So I'm going to read on anyway.
I just read this story an hour ago and I can tell this is top-tier writing. I found little to no grammar errors. The characters are fresh and unique, the world building is different from the usual cultivation novels (starts in a desert, layers of lore and mingling of food, culture). The story arcs are satisfying, imo the author should get more power stones. He seems to post daily so that's also a plus point.I really liked the part where Hu Shuo gets drunk, this story is a gem!
Trash chinese nationalism racism bullshit, why a mf would whrite that shit, wtf. Plus **** the CCP, and stop bringing these horrible novels.
Story is inconsistent.Ending is badly rushed.MC is rapist. Too many loopholes. My main problem is ending is so bad author rushed everything. Without explaining what happened.Not to mention main villain of this story is defeated by MC of another novel. Last chapter is just HUGE advertisement for this authors other story.Characters are likeable. It's fun read if you don't mind mc raping multiple girls.Story is good until author decides to rush everything.
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not what you'd expect. both the title and synopsis are basically bait, and only work for the first 10 or so chapters. then things start going out of hand, ridiculous reveals keep happening that we barely understand and before we get explanations, other reveals happen and those before get shoved out of the way and only get some basic explanations if you read between the lines. overall, to enjoy this you must have your brain online (you must think while reading this! no brain-dead reading where you forget things you dont like!), and thus see its faults, which is both a pro and a con for me. still ill give it 5 stars just because how different it is from others of its sort. and remember, dont believe what is "established
Webnovel is full of bs, this novel started with an advantage of 120k views and the only reason for it to win is because of that. it would've been in 3rd or 4th place if it didn't get that advantage.
reading novels in webnovel app is way betterhope you continuegogo get them allhdont stopgogo fast go go gooooooooook accept review... why must it be 140 character
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I love the feel of the story so far, also feels very refreshing compared to so much of the popular stuff on Webnovel at the moment. Keep it up!
Guys, please rate this novel and give me comments so that I could know what you think of it. Thank you so much! I really appreciate those that take the time to read my work.I know it needs a lot of polishing. I am not that good at writing and I am still learning because I don't have any background in it. So your small comments are truly helpful.