LoganSchmittka
Interesting storyline and very good idea to create character without feeling only focused in strength and revenge . I can't wait to see if he die in 3 years.
reading up to chapter 98. the author doesn't really know what he's doing. He's jumping from one storyline to the next without a clue. You don't really get attached so you don't care. just losing interest in these info dumps of new worlds.
I Really like this one Make moke Chapters pretty pretty Please small IDEA why Not Have the MC Join Goku until a Little after He turns Into a giant APE
I really liked the idea of this novel and it saddens me that it is left unfinished like this i hope the author get back to this beautiful story
160 chapters reviewthe novel is good at the beginning but the pace is very slow the magic system is quite organized although I don't like the fights they take too long they explain too much and the MC is traumatized for having killed people who deserved to die.He has personality problems from his past on earth; also people are extremely talkative the protagonist just says ah ah and they respond like 56 paragraphs trying to change MC way of thinking I don't understand how this happens, but is annoying. instead I would like more worlbuilding explaining how the world works.
Dude are you a 15 year old Virgin or what? Why are you continually butchering your own novel. If I was pointing an Uzi at you are you going to use a club instead of the rocket launcher on your back. Well that's what you're doing with your MC. You're ruining a perfectly good idea and theme for what plot holes. As OCD as you are about your flavor text you drop the ball for everything else. Maybe you should stop writing novels and go to work for enix and write flavor text for their video games.
This book is interrsting, but it takes too long to get updated.
Love this book
What a ride! I love this story!
Tries to normalize domestic abuse and violence against women. Victim blaming and shaming, Gratuitous amounts of physical emotional and mental abuse against women. It’s almost like the author gets off on it. Really gross
Amazing story from beginning to end! Very talented author. I love the world you created!!
Loved it ...
