It's too early to write a review about background or development and stuff(i gave them 5 kindly), yet i can say 1 thing. The grammar is unbearable. Physically hurts me to see all the errors, mispelled words(even in school, the misspelled words aren't that big of a deal until the mistake doesnt create a new word, with different meaning. Yours usually do. ), 0 sense sentences, absolute chaos in past sentences and other stuff... I am sorry mr. Author but i won't read this story till u edit it....And you can't say i am mean, because i gave you a 4,2 blindly.
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It's a good read also to take the time of your day to read it because of how good it is like it is amazing I would not suggest any other book
Nice story Gives nice feels. Don't think dirty either way I don't know about the updates but I am hella sure the author spoils his readers Good book .Love you author
Just reading the synopsis makes me smile silly and even made my heart beat so fast. Whats there not to like? Thank you so much author sama! more chapters please!
I love love love it, the plot events that happened in the book makes me foe all like my blood is boiling ? I fell addicted to it once I read it, wish this could be still continued ?? Thank you author for the book??
This story is a hidden gem, I was lucky to find it on the homepage of the web novel, if you are hesitating to read I can tell you that it is worth it, I am looking forward to the development of the story. congratulations author and continue with the work because it will surely be successful one day, maybe it will be fast or not then persist.
Haha don't know where to begin with this one. A very fun read with a plot that is still developing at the point I stopped reading. Humor is the driving force in this one with some terrific banter and dialogue coming through with the zany character interactions. I especially enjoyed the prologue chapter with the FBI-like group of aliens meeting to discuss some concerning events. Very well-written with great flowing prose. This is one talented author with a very vivid imagination at play. I've added this to my library as I have to see where he goes with all this. Anybody thinking about reading this, give it a go! You're guaranteed to have many laugh out loud moments!
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I will try to read and respond to most of your comments and queries. Please be kind to me as this is my first time and I want my readers to enjoy this book to the fullest. So please feel free to give any ideas or suggestions as to how i should carry on the story.
grammar is so bad that its hard to follow what's happening at times which makes it hard to enjoy
Has some good points, but this is gift type system, and the biggest problem is the text, idk if im this bad at reading but some sentences are misleading.