The first few chapters are a bit slow and highly descriptive, then ‘hula’ the pace goes up and then we suddenly have fast-paced chapters with lots of new characters and events unfolding which is a lot to digest in the short time which feels better in middle of novel rather than the beginning. I feel the sentences are a bit overly descriptive which feels kinda long and a bit boring when reading it. It definitely has some funny elements to it which is good. It might be just me but I feel some words like *APPEAR*, *GLOW*, *GLARE* and *MERGE* appeared a bit awkward. It felt like the world development and side character are overly prioritized than the main character as I found we get the mention of mc only after a few chapters. Still, you can see that the author has done a lot of research to include the gods of many different regions trying to blend them into one world. Overall, this novel has good potential but needs a bit of improvement.
"Eh ...." Writerz looks confuse as i expected.
self confidence.
"....." Mr. Rioy was silent with his serious expression.
Yess author.. pleaseee ????
I entered his house which was on the 5th floor of the apartment he was living in. There wasn't nothing much in his house. A living room with a gaming station, along with a mini kitchen along the side where he cooks his meals. His bedroom which was connected to the bedroom with door,his bathroom right next to the kitchen while his balcony was half open,the cool breeze blowing in. I went and opened the fridge and took out 2 sprites setting on the table along with the wings.
"There can only be one."
"Bukan urusan mu"
And we could all use a little change
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running