More chapters, more chapters, more chapters please ?
The story is enjoyable, but it lacks attention to detail. I'm at chapter 90 and still don't know the main character's appearance or height, which makes it difficult to visualize the scenes in my mind as a reader.Additionally, the pacing of the day is poorly organized, as there's no time allocated for sleep, making it seem secondary and unimportant.The power balance remains unclear. It would have been better to clarify the initial stages of the protagonist's journey rather than leaving it ambiguous for the readers, especially since it's hard to accept that a child between the ages of one and three can easily kill hundreds.As for the talents, they seem exaggerated. It appears that the author is leaning toward a more cosmic scale.
Finally the ending! I found myself waiting time and again for the chapters every day! the test of unity is such a powerful concept and I liked that is what you played with. A look into the world, of society, of it’s own misgivings.. The world could be so much better with unity yet not everyone is willing to make that final push against the tests that are waiting against them..
Just amazing start. I loved it .the background story in the streets of London . it's a great read. I am already hooked. It's Very different than most of the books I have read. I do recommend it to all. Keep the good work up Author .
I'm going to take the 100th review. Thanks to all who read and support the Incubus System. This is my first harem novel with a modern fantasy theme and I love it. I mixed the demon world with the modern human world and made the MC like living in two worlds. I make him fight, have fun with his friends, go to collage and a lot of ... (you can read from the synopsis). This novel will also take the theme of character development, weak to strong and a complicated plot that will more clearer over time. This book will be updated every 4 times / week. Every Thursday to Sunday. Hope you enjoy ~
I like how the story is developing, it was slow but progressive. A good plot, but I need time to say for sure how the story progresses. If Author-san releases more chapters, we can enjoy the continuous read.
way to much focus on non mc character I hate the Thomas character
These types of novels are my favorite because not only do they have an op main character but this one has cultivation and system. These both are considered favorite by this young master. The story looks pog, waiting for more.
Well then, since I shamelessly rated my first novel, I shall do it again on this one :DTo all my Apex System readers, fear not! I have not dropped Apex System, I repeat, I have not dropped it!I would probably do a better job in writing this novel since it's my favorite genre. Yes, VRMMO novels are my favorite <3Well, I hope you guys enjoy this novel.That's it for now. Peace out!
I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up.
I went to the Philippines, and I saw a huge gap between the rich and the poor. I have to say, the huge is unimaginable. I think this novel is really good in describing the life of poor people there. Their desperation, anger, etc. I think this is one of the best realistic fiction I read in webnovel.
I mostly read more about romance but this book was nice, with the few chapters I've read, I found it worth reading. A good job done by the author