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tsume: my husband went to his children ...
The explosion happened, but there's no sound because I make it as tight as possible.
Okay, not going to lie, reading the first couple of chapters made me almost drop the whole thing. The beginning was pretty unrealistic and female lead was just too ***** (although I know now that it was for the sake of character development). The descriptions were just a lot of telling and not showing, and the granny that adopted her in the beginning just seemed way too convenient lol.However, after giving the story a chance because I was bored, I actually saw the female lead getting beaten up (not literally) by others around her and actually developing a tougher skin! I still feel as if she is a bit overpowered though. She has so many skills! Also, I think her beauty level is way too high considering it’s only her first arc. Would have liked it more if the female lead was dealt more trials and had to rely more on her wits than her face. Am I too cruel? Lol. SLIGHT SPOILER:oooThe only part that I really didn’t like was her scene with the actual male lead. It didn’t feel logical to me. She should have had enough sense to not get her ass drunk and taken advantage of. I mean, come on, getting that depressed because she was stood up? The male lead also just seems too overbearing... I would have figured she wanted the opposite of his type. (Calm, low key, attracted, but not too attracted to her face?) Right now, I just can’t really see their future relationship as anything deeper. He just sees her outer beauty. Well. Hopefully that’ll change.
The crocodile then looked around and saw me, now we are up to date let's see what I'll do next.
Rose giggled as he showed her pride.
Only a few moments after, a mysterious voice appeared in the heads of the gathered cultivators. From the other information Ke YongAn gathered from Tian Nian, this mysterious voice was a strange phenomenon that happened every time the event arrived.
"What!?"
exploited this ability they had for taking other powers and engorged themselves.
I’ll support this author, hope you do your best. Good luck.
This is it...this is the book that made me have a liking to Harem...I love the way each of the female characters are not felt like they r left outLove your work Seraph??
reviewing for the free fp. 4 stars for free
this novel is pretty good ...a good read to pass the time
