the 1st few paragraphs was all I needed to keep reading. this review was done after reading chapter 1. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds. keep it up, author
@Author: I am struck at ch 194 in web novel and I can not read ch 195. Where can I read ch 195?
The story has schemes upon schemes upon schemes lol MC has to scheme smartly to survive as well, guarding not only against martial artists, but also against his fake parents and siblings. He has an interesting system that not only gives him rewards, but also allows him to gain cultivation experience/insight via simulations. Quite powerful, indeed. There might be harem involved, but I haven't read too far. All I know is that MC is ambitiously seeking power, glory, wealth and all the girls (or something like that).Some people might not like the strong hatred towards the Japanese people, but this feels semi historically connected since the history of the Chinese, Japanese and Koreans is kind of dark and gloomy. If you are uncomfortable with this, don't read it. Skip it. If you are capable of turning off your brain and accepting this is a fictional story to waste your time, give it a try.
Just one question will he later somehow learn how to become human and will barely see his ice dragon form because I hate it when that happens?!
Hello dear readers I will not be sayinganything about the novel everything will unfold eventually all I will give you is thatNo stupid charactersAnd no Chinese type writing with faceslapping and suchThat's all I will give you that rest can be seen in the novel
EXPEXPEXPEXPpp...Oh. Hey. It's Fries here. As the author, I am required by the law (of shamelessness) to leave a self-review. 4.6 / 5. Won't be perfect. But it will be completed.So yeah. Don't take this story too seriously. As the writer, I only have 2 goals:1. Finish this book (5 volumes, 350 - 450 chapters total)2. Enjoy the writing process. Have fun!Hope you like this story as well! Have a good time!
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This guy has seen somethings in real life. His combat scenes are detailed, realistic and bloody. He captures the spirit of war, and fighting a hidden one really well. the world of his story blends seamlessly in to ours. What he hints at possibly happening, interweaving real world events in to his narrative is amazing. Love it!
This book.isn't for me.the prologue is too long.and i thought that there was a japanese vibe going on.unfortunately the author.did not capture.that vibe.as for the structure of the story it's bland.and boring. and very VERY scripted.i can't feel the emotions of the characters it's as if it is forced. the personalities of the characters is also forced. your grammar is somewhat tolerable but know how to use proper words in a sentence. as well as proper commas and periods. NOT JUST THAT but fix the broken words of the sentences those are making me cringe so much. i was excited when i saw this book but my excitement turned into instant dissapointment. i also read what the author said. you apologise for your mistakes but your apology doesn't validate.to anything if you don't fix it.Your writing just lacks.professionalism.i'm sorry to say. it's as if.a kid wrote it. and yet a children's book is more fun than this.i rarely give.5.0 star but to those who earned and deserve it.right now.this book is 2-3 stars in my view.
I was hooked from the very beginning. It's super exciting to be with their adventure. Please write more. I am truly interested what will happen to the boys and to Subangdaku.
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