FantasyLordvJA
Badass MC, I like her already~ It's still 20 chapters, need more time to find out about the excitement she'll give us. I hope there will be no plot twist. I want her to stay as evil. Keep going, author!
Everything is excellent so far. The only problem with the novel is that the updates are slow but since the chapters are big and the author might have IRL stuff to do so I won't complain much. I also like the fact that the author makes the illustrations by himself. The illustrations are amazing. Keep up the work author.
One thing up front: the plotting is ridiculous. It’s like an emu on crack wrote down verbatim his little brother’s ideas and tried to make them work. However, comma, it is the kind of ridiculous that is vastly entertaining. The protagonist is a pro at effing up everybody else’s crap. Two telling, awesome details: 1) This uses more Chinese mythology ad legendary history, and more systematically, than any xuanhuan/xianxia I’ve read. 2) When the protagonist learns that past cultivation experts created pocket worlds by snipping off pieces of his world, he immediately vows, When I become a god, I’ll make those thieves give all that land back. Fair warning: the level of misogyny is a little lower than average for a CN, but still very much there, along with the usual homophobia. If you can read past that and put your brain on low power, this can entertain you quite nicely.
Author is a lolicon, can't write a decent paragraph most of the time, Refers to female characters as "him" "his" or "he
Good short story, would like to know when and if the other stories are out
Translation Quality: okay this novel definitely has better quality than many other novels currently on trial read. But unless and until I find the raws to Compare with this translation, I will give it 4 stars. Story Development: This has a very good Story development potential from the 20 chapters, I have currently read. This book does not have many clìche situations as most of other "Sign-in" novels. The concept of "Sign-in" is definitely a copy and paste from many other but the Execution of it way different. I will also give this category 4 stars. Character Design: The MC of this story has the best Personality and Character design, how you ask ? Mc is not a beta male while also not being an alpha He's what you might consider a perfect balance, between both and doesn't shy away from being a douch when necessary which can be proven on the fact How he treated his "Brothers". Definitely 5 stars for this category. Update Stability: Can't Give a answer since, it has still not been chosen to be serialised currently, but I am giving 5 stars to not affect the review based on something I don't know. World Background: This is the area based on the first 20 chapters, which I think this book is kind of lacking ? The world is a typical copy and paste of any regular Cultivation World But I'll still give it 4 stars after all this not a major factor most of the readers consider.
wow this and ancestor above are definitely the best novels in this trial read and I hope they get picked even tho they probably won't be.?????
Just a boring novel. Not really sure how to explain it any way else.character limit character limit character limit character limit
It's just monster Paradise mixed with super gene only worse... Besides why take up a novel which the author is on hiatus!? Pretty dumb, like always web novel y'all have other novels to update (dark King) but still wasting time with this BS
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No one I say no oneNot even Gods will disagreeNot even Mad Snail will Disagreeby what I am going to sayMad Snail, your pet name suits you depending on the pace you have while releasing chapters . You took the name by seeing the future or changed your name to mock readers & yourself by changing the pace. Well Snail is the most suited name based on the pace while Mad represents the Overall impact the Novel, Manga & Ani.. Sorry except anime; leaves on the mind of the readers.
Im suprise this novel is quite good! The story is something about man who go to parallel world that had dull entertaining world so he can bring live to the entertain world using his knowledge from his past world.
