I must say it's good, a very nice story and I'll be looking forward to how it develops further.Now to reach the 140 words needed.All my devotion betrayedI am no longer afraidI was too blinded to seeHow much you've stolen from meYou want to know whyI feel so horrifiedI let my innocence dieYou want to know whyI can't be pacifiedYou made me bury somethingI won't be sleeping tonightI only wanted a blessing madeNow I've been labeled a renegadeIt seems so clear now what I must doYou're no immortal, I won't let themDeify youThey view you as the new messiahDeify youRenew belief in some demented manYou want to know whyIt seems the passion has diedWe've all been living this lieYou want to know why myWill's been fortifiedYou made me hunger againGood luck sleeping tonightI only wanted a blessing madeNow I've been labeled a renegadeIt seems so clear now what I must doYou're no immortal, I won't let themDeify youThey view you as the new messiahDeify youRenew belief in some demented manAll my devotion betrayedI am no longer afraidAll my devotion betrayedI am no longer afraidI was too blinded to seeHow much you've stolen from meI was too blinded to seeAll my devotion betrayedI am no longer afraidI was too blinded to seeHow much you've stolen from meI only wanted a blessing madeNow I've been labeled a renegadeIt seems so clear now what I must doYou're no immortal, I won't let themDeify youThey view you as the new messiahDeify youRenew belief in some demented manI only wanted a blessing madeNow I've been labeled a renegadeIt seems so clear now what I must doYou're no immortal, I won't let themDeify youThey view you as the new messiahDeify youRenew belief in some demented manI was too blinded to seeHow much you've stolen from meThe song has nothing to do with the story
This novel sounds so cliche, sigh I hope it won’t be a disappointment. Guys pray to the potato god ?. Then again everything had been disappoint me in but whatever let’s do THiS!!!!!!! Reeeeeeeeeeee
its pretty good for me. has been following this from gt. hope it get received as well here.........................................................................................
This novel is super bad, I actually really liked it at first but it’s a really repetitive disgrace, the MC is to much of a fucking pussy to kill any other chink, considering the fact that he’s not only given an unlimited future in the world but some of the most powerful gods near worship him, all he can do with his standing is be a little idiotic racist ***** towards Japs and with no holds barred or any sensibility whatsoever- example at Chapter 500+ MC screams like a little ***** at any Jap he comes across regardless of how much powerful they are, yet all he does for other Chinks is whine and threaten to kill them for trying to murder his FUCKING FAMILY and RAPE HIS FUCKING WOMEN, honestly I really wonder, depending on the author’s gender, would he/she still whine like a ***** if his wife/ she was getting raped? I already know that he would be super chill and just kick people in the balls if they tried to murder his mom and dad.
an exciting read. loved d characters. can't wait for d next chapters. wonder how axiu will resurrect and how Chen Fan will re unite with his wife. more power
I was waiting for this novel for days but its just a waste of time. You can't tell the difference between the conversationsAnother system novel where instead of being a proper ai, the system just likes to talk ****.You can try this but i dont think u will have a good time.
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I Love it's not a big deal but I don't have ah phone again and I hope you have a great day and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same place as last time I don't recommend it to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town for my bro ? the doo doo ?????? of the same time I don't have ah phone
Well I finally into reading your storu finally. Sniper kept bugging me to do it saying you could use the help. And what the hell I forced you to read my stuff more times then I can count. I'm glad to see you managed to get this story going. All of us kept trying but just couldn't get it right. Oh well. to the actual review. I like the story but then again I helped with like 10% so I am a bit bisas with my review. Sniper went full critic mode but ill be mpore gental. I do like it. The ear;y chapters are kind of bad but around the train station which is the last capter is where it gets good to me. Ken and Hero are kind of funny. I like how Hero looks. I look forward to seeing what else will happen. I hate Kitsunes chapter though. The action almost dulled me and Kitsune just seems like a typical rich boy. Feels more like a card board in the shape of a man.That said I do enjoy reading this story and I know you can do a lot better. I look forward to seeing you improve.
Hey WebNovel, how about finishing all the existing stories you picked up earlier, before you start translating new novels. In the last year you dropped like 5 or 6 popular novels which were completed for 50-70%Seriously, whats the point for me to buy premium for this novel or other, if in the end you are going to drop it midway? I'd much more prefer if I can get 6 chapters daily from one novel, instead of 2 chapters from 3 novels. I'd even pay some money since its that what you are after, but like don't even think about getting a dolla from me before you pick up the novels you dropped and finished the existing translations. But if you still try to take new novels, at least pick up something good. Or else you will loose majority of your readers. You will not get any profit like this, c'mon, WebNovel dawg, you can get 1 dollar from 100000 average readers or 10 dollars from 100 rich readers, its obvious which is more profitable. You get my idea, right?Guys please like this comment so that webnovel will hopefully see it and finish the existing translations ASAP before switching to new books.
Here's what strikes me about the conflict in this passage—it's almost entirely internal, and that's what makes it so effective. Lin Heng's external conflict (his past catching up to him, his muteness, his wounded back) is always present as background radiation, but the real tension is psychological. He's a man who has spent his entire life in a shadow camp, trained to be a weapon, sentenced to death for failing. And now he's sitting in a courtyard eating apricots while a woman he barely knows takes care of him. The stakes aren't about whether he'll survive the next battle—they're about whether he'll ever feel safe enough to just… live. Every moment of peace is a victory he doesn't know how to process. Qingqing's stakes are different but equally real. She was a servant who feared punishment, feared being sold, feared living by other people's moods. Now she has a home, a garden, a man to care for. The text says 'She finally had a home of her own. She would never again have to fear punishment from her masters.' That's not just comfort—that's the fulfillment of a survival-level need. The suspense here isn't 'what bad thing will happen next' but 'can these two people actually sustain this peace?' Because we know Lin Heng's past exists. We know the shadow camp doesn't just let people walk away. The author is building dread through contrast—the sweeter the present moment, the more we fear its loss. And that's far more effective than any chase scene could be.