I'm focusing on character building, world building and how one deals with problem of life and death with an eccentric attitude. Please left a review if you like it!
I read this up to chapter 23.I think the author did a good job in writing this book. The quality is excellent, and the writing is neat, and everything flowed nicely. I can see that the author is a fan of sci-fi and did some homework as well. Although it's still too early to tell about the story development, so far, the story is moving on nicely. It was not too rushed or too slow. I quite enjoy reading this novel.Anyway, good luck, author.
I am a dog I love fried spring rolls! I like your novel! Take my 5 stars! Write more and publish new chapters everyday!Fried spring rolls is delicious when dipped in a sweet and spicy sauce!HAHAHA COMIC SANS MS FONT
Great book thus far, author takes care to go back and edit if needed instead of just authors notes later. Great choice in music references and easy to get into and flow is smooth. Overall a very good read. Looking forward to the rest of the book.
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Let's just get it put of the way. Yes the beginning is extremely similar to TBATE and how it started, although with some minor tweaks. If you've read TBATE you probably already know what's going to happen up until it diverges. The story is great, even after the story strays from TBATE it's still innovative and interesting to read. If you like TBATE you should read this aswell, it's a fantasy and worth reading even if you have no idea what TBATE is.
Shamelessly reviewing my own novel hehehehe. I'm encouraging people to read this novel of mine and place their thoughts in the comment. I'm open to all criticism as I believe that it can improve my writing. I hope you all enjoy your reading. Thank you very much.I plan to upload 1 chapter a day-Lazy Gamer.
its a good start for this novel for me, need more detailed information about mobs , and i just want to know about the frequency of updates ?
great novel , really good story , interesting themes and scenarios , the mc appears to have some intriguing abilities , i'm looking forward to seeing how quickly and how big his harem gets
Yeah it's me shameless rating five stars.
I love the idea of this novel. Its very well written and the concept is not new but its nicely done and put together well. I only wish the author posted more chapters faster.
I cannot comprehend why one would leave a one star review because of some community. It is fact that some cultures are better than others if that were not the case we would not have criminalised female genital mutilations. (We still have not done it for male but that is another discussion). I’m going to be honest here, I did this review only to spite people leaving really low quality reviews without any kind of criticism that is actually valid. Make critical analysis of his writing instead of political. Jesus... by the way anecdotal evidence is only good sometimes but not to make a larger point so stop it. Just because you may not have seen any gangsters of one type of community it does not mean that it is not a trend. There is always exception towards one generalisiation but that does not mean that generalisations are inherently bad because most of them have basis in reality.