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Nice story, the pacing is just right, not too fast and not too slow either.the Mc's abilities are overpowered but stay within reason. they are also fun to play with. though when he got that nerve control skill I wonder why he never thought about increasing his reaction speed or even his perception of time, that would've been OP. all in all, it's a good read for a Naruto fanfic. keep it up!
Of course, I'd give my work a biased 5 star rating. Apocalyptic world background ✅️Interesting Plot ✅️Good characters ✅️Action ✅️This is something I created years back and refined over time, so it is well written if I do say so myself. It is going to be quite the roller coaster. I don't want to spoil things, but feel free to ask me questions here. One thing to know is that MC doesn't mean what you think it does.
it's a good book I like it wish there were more chapters
The Doctor, he got an beatiful eyes, the left eye is white and the right one is green.
"To the God, please dont let your servant fall to toxidness of human. Keep us away from ridicoulus of human. Omewa mo shinderu."
- SI! MUY BIEN! OH ESSE! MAS! I'M HERE BOSS! I'M HERE! -
Sarah gets up and walks towards the bathroom of the mansion where they have lived since they fled the orphanage in which they lived as a child.
"Senior, Who might you be?" When adam came crashing, Elder ma almost wet his robe that a person he didn't know suddenly showed up without him sensing.* It's a mortal!! No wait, Mortals cannot survive that fall and his beast... It can hide its cultivation!! Beast of that caliber must be a sovereign grade or higher!!*
Artemis lands in a crouch, bringing another arrow out of her quiver, stringing and bringing slight tension to it. When she's close, Cheshire turns to her side, putting her hand underneath her body, and knocking Artemis' legs out from under her.
Hole in me and hole in you