Overall a good start, the author certainly has talent. However the development would benefit from some adjustments. Sometimes following between the chapters is a bit difficult. This is something that can certainly be improved. Apart from that it is interesting. I think that this story has great potential.
I read it every day before I go to sleep. It has changed my life. I finally have money, women and love. It's as if I've found the key to life.
It's fine I guess but it's just a lot of lectures about tech stuff, a revenge fantasy, and after the MC releases his FIRST EVER PRODUCT, he becomes the target of a government assassination... pretty dumb...
Came from the prequel and 15 chapters already got me loving the book. Looking forward to Grants story and how he manages to work this out ??
Leader of Ridicoulus Human I.
Angel and Devil are creatures of Dark and Light who lived hostile each other for hunder centuries.
"Uhh.... Fine! But you should tell me the kind of business you wish to conduct first, but be careful because if it isn't good enough, you should just give up the idea of a business." Said Song Tu Hao, his expression serious.
The curriculum of magic was introduced but not pursued until the children showed they had the spark. The spark meaning the natural affinity for magic. Typically it would appear during their pubescent years; although there are rare cases of it appearing at a younger or older age.
Some little boys had come up on the steps and were looking into the hall; when I told them who had arrived they went reluctantly away.
"Calm down. You're being waaayyy too over the top."
"If you get lost, I will let you live... don't try and spoil my fun, boy."
Habang nagtatalo ang dalawa, isang batang babae ang nanood sa kanila. Naramdaman niya ang matinding pagnanais ni Ark na manggamit habang siya pagala-gala. Kaya sinundan niya kung saan ito nanggaling.