The narrative is exceptional, with well-developed characters and an engaging plot; it's truly top-notch. My only request would be for additional content and a precise translation. Thank you so much for taking on this story; I'm eagerly anticipating its release!
just to let people know it was picked back up its just this site hasn't updated it yet is all. SO don't worry folks it still is going
Why are the views and bookmarks 0 when there are already comments on the novel ?
Reading into the 300s and it’s a good story except the mc is as dumb as a bag of bricks making it a tough read. Everything else so far has been done well.
Why do mc in cover looks like Lelouch to me...
I think it was after their first kiss.
THE PREVIOUS BANK OWNERS WERE DUMB, ESPECIALLY THE LAST. so please do not over analyze it and continue reading 'caz'
the summary sounds f*ck*ng ai
Do you have other craft novels like the legendary mechanic. Overgear...
Alright, I grew tired of it. I genuinely despise the author's portrayal of the protagonist's mindset and how he treats his friends as expendable, with the idea that only he can confront powerful enemies and shoulder their burdens. The narrative often implies that these friendships are deep because they matter to him, but it comes across as him taking them for granted. When tragedy strikes, he feels guilt, but then assumes the responsibility for avenging them, even if they had no prior connection with him. It's incredibly frustrating and melodramatic.
The scene where their branch is attacked and his friends are caught off guard without proper weapons, despite knowing the danger, is infuriating. It's hard to comprehend how a character capable of incredible feats could be kidnapped simply due to one person's oversight and another leaving their weapon behind, especially after the main character warned them to be cautious. I loathe this type of plot device used to manipulate the protagonist's emotions.
Additionally, there's Li, a character who is supposedly both a gentleman and arrogant. The translation might have lost some nuance, but I've decided to stop reading at this point, despite being halfway through. The story is starting to grate on my nerves, and I need to move on.
novel website?
thanks for the spoiler you just saved half of my iq