This story is fun and light haha I can't stop my laugh in some chapters its just I need more chapters please author I want more I need more im addicted to this story now.. ????
Chap 6 Review. Novel started cool, with a cool, even if overused ideea buuut, this is where things go slightly awry.Mc starts to use his knowledge of future, to get OP, when suddenly we are thrown into readin a One Piece fanfic. He almost copy-paste so much, to the point he can be "sued" for copywriting. The way MC is intoduced into his new powers, which were nothing but Phoenix-Phoenix, Lightning-Lightning and Light Light Devil Fruits)which are named Forbidden Fruits btw) is soo cringy and weird. He proves an excelent level of mastery for something he never experienced, one shotting everything and everyone. There is no training arc , so to speak, which should be necessary for every "return to past situation
teniendo en cuenta que es una historia con pocos capítulos hasta ahora, se evidencia que tiene una muy buena estructura básica en el fondo mundial, la aparición del sistema puede ser algo que se use a menudo pero sigue siendo el como lo use el autor lo que hace que sea o no interesante, por lo cual hasta ahora estoy viendo que es una historia que vale la pena leer y anticipar el como actuara y convertirá a las hijas potenciales en hijas.la liberación de 1 capitulo diario también ayuda a mantener el interés activo.ánimos autor, seguiré tu historia.
It is like to read about CIA agents. Its a damn good story and I love it. A bit show on the update, but it is compensated by the quality. But it might be a bit confusing some times.
From my expierence on this website I have read many of good books. But honestly none of them even come close to the quality that is shown from this one. I cant help but feel refreshed when reading this book, not because I enjoy the main characters pain but because his pain is actually relatable. He doesnt only get physically hurt like most main characters but he also gets mentally hurt. His struggles are not only large monsters that want to smash him to a pulp but also his struggle to understand himself and what he feels during his journey. Never have I read such a good book on this website and I honestly doubt anything will come close for quite awhile. Bravo and keep up the great work Mr. Author.
more more more more more more more more more more more more mormore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Si definitivamente es una gran historia, con ese toque de maldad fluida en el protagonista y con sustento solido, (cuando aveces confunden a alguien oscuro con cabrón ), me gusta como se desarrolla la trama futura al leer está novela me trae buenos recuerdos de otra gran historia, pero tristemente por razones de sensibles la buscaron eliminar hasta en otros sitios web.Psdt: ten cuidado cuando pongas escenas subidas de tono por que talvez las usen en tu contra por contenido no autorizado o algo asi.?
good storyyy
I am loving this book so damn much…and the character of Julian is awesome..
your book has me hooked o?
I love this story, it's AWESOME I hope there are more chapters soon
Another fantastic book! The author does such an amazing job of character development, her plots are always well thought out, and the stories keep you coming back for more! This was my favorite by far, and I can’t wait for the next to come! Thank you for all of your hard work and time!