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It legitimately is borderline peak web novel, with human characteristics, young masters have brains, MC grows and gets smarter at a proper rate and the weak to strong aspect is done perfectly. The plot/plot twists are great and the development is perfect.

Well I'm the author, so I have to give it 5 stars, but here are some reasons why you should as well.1. You like face slapping? There will be plenty of that!2. You like dark comedy? This novel's dark enough that I can't even see the light switch in front of me.3. You like cultivation? Well join an adventure where each step will be a slow climb.4. You like systems? I got all the system you can want, you'll seriously get sick of it.If that didn't convince you, then maybe this will, cute girls...

Gotta say this is a pretty good novel by web novel standards, the premise and setting of the book definitely was not what I expected in a good way. Character development is there, and it is decent, although basic everyone acts with purpose and could be a real person. Mc is logical and practical, not ruthless but definitely willing to do things to get what he wants. Setting is interesting and I am excited to how the world is going to be explored. The brother relationship in the novel is awesome and a breath of fresh air compared to the loner mc or the little sister tropes. Writing quality is decent, the sentences flow well and it makes sense. Overall would recommend to anyone wanting a new fresh take on beast gamer novels. The world works and there are no glaring plot holes to my knowledge.

The plot is slow moving and at times feels more like a slice of life, but with a system in the background. It's a rather fun, slow read. If you are looking for action than this is not for you, but if you want a hard working, normal Mc then this is for you.

Written by a 3 year old. Crappy story anything goes, no planning at all. Reading this is insulting your intelligence. Worst of all is even all the plagarism from 'my beautiful ceo' and 'super soldier king' could not save this novel from all the ridiculousness of the story. 1) mc flys plane to china and takes a bus but no money for meals. 2) sniper assasin only carries 10 bullets shoots randomly and jumps out to fight melee combat due to lack of ammo. 3) divorcing dont need the cert just your id. Brainless plot hole.Critcally all females gets wet horny when looking at mc. All men becomes losers and their balls stomped literally. Seriously the author has a grudge against men balls.

please get an editor, while i didnt see any spelling errors which makes me happy, the sentence structure is awful. also please check to make sure that you arent trying to make a wors that doesnt have a plural form into a plural word. preys should just be prey, i didnt see it but please dont use equipments just equipment, etc

I like this novel a lot. My only grief with it is that the updates aren't released at ludicrous speed. Am I at 140 yet... how about now? Just a little bit more I think

I started reading this novel a few days ago, and got up to date really fast... So far, I have loved this novel a lot!!!! Love the characters, a little weirded out with the goat-kid "interaction" though... not my kind of sauce...The best part of all is that you don't find that stupid cliché that you find in so many novels of this genre: I was betrayed by everyone, included my family... Nobody loves me... I hate everyone... I'm going to prove them I'm the best and destroy them all kind of BS...Love how the character is loved by his family and doesn't have to go through those stupid cliches that most of the main characters in most novels go through just to justify the ruthlessness of its characters...Thanks for the novel! Keep up the good work!You'll have me looking forward to your posts!

YOU ARE THE DEAD i Got the chills so many times while reading it!!

"Sticking close? Who does Little Zhiyang want to stick close to? Me?" I need a minute. I literally need a minute. This scene is everything. The accidental sticker, the immediate voice message reply, the way his voice is described—sexy, low, magnetic, with a chuckle that hides 'countless hooks.' The author doesn't just tell us he has a good voice, they MAKE US FEEL it through the prose. 'Each word coiling around and licking at the depths of her heart.' That's not just description, that's an experience. I was sitting there with my phone like 'excuse me, how is a written scene supposed to make me feel this flustered?' And then the second voice message. "Mhm, sticking close~" with that lowered tone. Qiao Zhiyang burying her face in a cushion. The whole 'voice enthusiast' realization. This is peak romantic tension writing and the author knows exactly what they're doing. Every sentence is calibrated to make her (and us) feel the weight of that voice. But then—AND THIS IS WHAT MAKES IT BRILLIANT—the third voice message starts with "Third Brother likes you—" and just STOPS. The pause. The deliberate ambiguity. Qiao Zhiyang's heart going thump thump thump. She's convinced he's about to say something devastatingly romantic, and then he finishes with "I like your sticker emojis." The emotional whiplash! She's equal parts relieved and infuriated, and the text captures it perfectly: "That kind of sentence break was totally unfair!" What gets me though is the quiet emotional moment that comes after all that. The Estazolam scene. She's alone in the hotel room, holding that bottle of pills, remembering how her family treated her anxiety like a shameful secret. 'The Qiao family absolutely cannot have an abnormal young lady.' And then Cen Zhou's voice echoes in her memory: 'Don't get used to being wronged.' The contrast between the flustered, blushing girl from the voice messages and this vulnerable moment where she's confronting her past—it's devastating. She throws the pills away and declares herself 'Niu Gulu Yang.' That's not just a plot point, that's an emotional victory. She's choosing herself.